OUR ORIGINAL POETRY: Share It Here
Hello there everyone!
If you're reading this it means that you probably are quite fond of poetry and writing it to. This is a thread to post all and any poetry that you may have, be it happy, sad, angry or just silly. All styles are welcome (free verse, couplets, slam) and it would be great to have at least one poem up a day for all of us to enjoy together!!
The Problem About Zoos
-After Charles Bukowski
By: Sam Rosen
there?s a bluebird in my lungs that pleads
for a Marlboro, but I quit smoking
one year ago. I beg,
stop chirping so loud,
I?m not going to let you
die.
there?s a bluebird in my lungs that also sings for a joint,
instead I carry an electronic cigarette
to inhale water vapor as truce, so that he hides
from the workers, boss
and cops, so they?ll never know
he?s in there.
there?s a raven on my left thigh that?s tattooed
on skin, but I?m more permanent than him.
I?d cut off his legs,so he doesn?t claw my eyes,
but would he want to claw my eyes?
I ask,
do you want to drive
me to work? do you want
to scribble down teacher?s
notes?
there?s a raven on my left thigh that?s tattooed
next to a portrait of Poe, and
Poe shifts side-eyed to acknowledge
raven?s stare. I say,
this is why you can?t be my eyes,
you?re too busy stripping Poe down
to bones.
there?s a cobra on my tongue that wants to hiss
my words, but I silence him by feeding
him mice, but I?m too afraid he?ll bite
my lip, so I let him curse my enemies
and kiss my grandma.
there?s a cobra on my tongue that I keep caged
within Pandora?s Box, he absorbs the sins
I commit into each layer of skin,
and I swallow his sheddings
with a shot of Jim.
there?s a security guard decaying in my brain that
lays comatose in front of I Love Lucy reruns,
screens that are supposed to monitor
barbaric animals within my body.
he must have passed out a while back,
I feel the gnats nibbling on his skin.
there?s a guard decaying in my brain that
once tamed these animals, but now
they?ve picked locks on cages, and
it?s chaotic enough to make any man insane,
but I?m not insane, so
I must be divine -
I survive what locks schizophrenics in padded rooms,
while hugging themselves into comas.
I am god from my mind to the footprints I stamp on concrete -
my wingspan smile and converse rubber soles
invite disciples out to dinner for glasses of white russians.
I am god in my mind and a sinner on toes -
scaring my followers to stay the night between my sheets,
and are quick to leave next morning,
as they wipe snake skin off from lips,
but I?ve never spent one night alone.
A clenching heart,
An unsteady breath,
Two fists formed,
I can, I can.
A slicing word,
An earful of spite,
Taking gasping breaths,
I can't, I can't. I'm done.
This is amazing. I relate to this poem so much, it really sends the reader through a journey. Nice job :)
Aw, that means so much. Thank you!
🎇🎆 Play Under the Stars
Accessories of the night
Out shining one another's light
Gazes fall on them in the dark
Many a lost and found heart
Love plays its act out below
Stars accompanying, cued to go
Taking its place in the velvet sky
Shimmering, like passion in people's eyes
The scene is set for an audience that is glowing
Dreams drifting, relationships rekindled, flowing
An ongoing story with so much to be told
Witnessing joy, fulfilment and unfortunate woe
Played out under the night, half its canvas a bejewelled ceiling
The carpet the play, the people, afraid in the day no longer concealing
Hey I'm Hannah and I'm 16 I love writing and I use poetry as an outlet for my emotions when my anxiety and depression is bad. Thanks :)
@HannahCoffee98, This poem is lovely. The images of the night are beautiful, evocative, wonderful.
Aw thanks you :)
@HannahCoffee98 you are truly gifted
she is me by Tiffany(beautifulmystry)
for the past two decades I've been looking for she
only to realize that "she" is me
this girl is strong and intelligent you see
but only to realize that "she" is me
this girl is beautiful and trustworthy you see
but only to realize that "she" is me
this girl has a voice and confidence you see
but only to realize that "she" is me
this girl I wish that I could see, is right in the mirror looking back at me
This is amazing, @beautifulmystery! I am in love with this poem.
awww thank you! that made me smile!!!
Staying quiet.
I love you
You don't feel the same
It's alright for you
But me its not okay
Watching you love her
As I stand alone
Breaking my heart
Even more than you know
I smile politely
As you wave towards me
then turn away quickly
As tears plead to leave
I try to forget
But the feelings stay true
Walking away
To guard myself from you
Dear @TurtleTadpole, this poem beautifully captures the pain of trying to appear unhurt when the pain is racking us. Wow.
I especially admire the striking assonance in this line: tears plead to leave.
I can hear breathing.
Inhales and Exhale.
Of dark sorrowful things...
Lost Hopes and Dreams.
Repeatingly taken.
I can hear Loving and
Caring.What a lost art
indeed. So I stay
along thesedeep, dreadful
hearts,souls, dead things.
My Heaven, My Hell...
Your Heaven, Your Hell...
I see those breaths
hot, against the glass.
Smoke, pain, nothingness.
There is nothingnesshere.
I realize the pain.
The goneness of it all,
what a long . . . goneness.
What a long story.
What a long nothingness.
What a long . . .Go alone
to the deep woods.
Where I stand awaiting.
Where I stand pleading.
The hopes are there.
The love is there.
Yes it is I,
insaneI, love,
I know. But go.
There is life waiting
there. Just life.
That's what you've
been waiting for.
What I have been waiting
for...What we all are for...
Goodnight,my dear,
goodnight,.Yet I must
warn you. There are no
lights in the deep woods,my dear.
*Sorry I know itsucks I just wanted to write...something, anything.
Dear@r3w1teit, I think this poem is really good. Seriously. There is an elusive rhythm, and a deeptone of voice. A sense of mystery, part of the story untold. There is . . . gravitas.
THANK YOU for taking the risk to post it and share it.
Love it is not real it is a fanticy we can all live in a fanticy if we find the right one
there is power in mistakes; there is love in the coals of the dying flames
we are, all of us, flawed
separated into a million tiny fragments
just glass shards of what we once were
we are, all of us, united
by such common imperfections
such beauty in our design
we are, all of us, intended to be broken
our purpose is to shatter
to crash and burn and self-destruct
so we can, all of us, rebuild
recreate and redesign
empires of mistakes
shrines to our flaws
there is god in our missteps
there is power in every broken whisper
as we try again to fix what we destroyed
we are, all of us, ruined
we were destine for the fire
we were car crashes abandoned and deserted
on the edge of the woods
the plants grow wild around the jagged ruins
of this accident and
there are creatures living in hollowed skulls
in the mangled back seat of a teenager's pleas
we are, all of us, alive
in our death and in our birth we are heartbeats
strung across the world like christmas lights
our pulse dangles off the roof of skyscrapers
and drags and loops through the universe
we are the red thread tied around fingers
we are the blood pumping in veins
we are tired
we are weak
we are small and
we are sad
but we are so so alive in our mistakes and in our failures
we are repurposed, recycled, and reused but we areworth it
in our eyes there is desire and in our palms there is a choir
we are.
all of us.
alive.
Oh my god. What a majestic, BEAUTIFUL poem.
So nice poem.. just so good..
@brighteyes8025. Wow, your poem is really good,. Awesome!!
I'll show you
how to be creepy
You'll know the a-z
of being insane
Do you remember
that scary faces
All the photos,
that most beautiful dream
Falling in love with you
was beyond my control
A person like me
should never be
with a person like you
Acting all giggly aroundyou
Just to hear your voice
on that high note
I never said
we're a couple
Just collecting beautiful memories
Just telling you that
sooner or later
a boy and girl as best friend
will fall for each other
Guess what?
You're my favourite love poem.
Dear @CaringSusan,
This isBEAUTIFUL. It portrays something so human, so real . . .(deep sigh).
Thank you for sharing it.