OUR ORIGINAL POETRY: Share It Here
Hello there everyone!
If you're reading this it means that you probably are quite fond of poetry and writing it to. This is a thread to post all and any poetry that you may have, be it happy, sad, angry or just silly. All styles are welcome (free verse, couplets, slam) and it would be great to have at least one poem up a day for all of us to enjoy together!!
Reflection/noitcelfer
Why is it that I see,
This face stare back,
With haunting eyes at me?
Tears stained dry upon her cheek,
Always critical,
Adamant she's worthless and weak,
Unable to see the beauty so many tell her so,
Blind to the truths,
Hindered by her past, unable to let go,
Believing the lies she was once told,
Unsightly, unwanted,
No future to behold,
A person so hateful towards herself was clear,
Not realising the hurt,
She caused to those she held so dear
Standing on the edge of tomorrow,
Feeling bodily numb,
In fear that it would bring only more sorrow.
A heart of broken glass rests inside,
Pieced together by hope,
And by sheer pride,
Inflicting pain by her only weapon of choice,
Each wound deepened,
Scarred each time, by her own voice,
Bound by fear as if chained,
Shackled, defeated,
Feeling her confidence wain,
Yet once whilst she was young,
This child was abundant in innocence,
So eager to play out her days in the sun,
But those days are long since been,
Just the memories of youth,
When she was once so keen,
Altered by venomous tongues with all their wrath,
Can do so much,
When you seek out your chosen path,
Once so fearless in all she did,
Never to say die,
With all her ambitions to bid,
So why does my reflection show,
A woman so different,
To the one I used to know?
@Jessica797, This poem is filled withstrong images andmoments that will resonate with many of us at 7 Cups. It is sad that somany people will share the painful feelingsexpressed here so powerfully, but I think they will.
And that's one of the things that makes a good poem: universality of human experience, expressed compactly, vividly, powerfully. Evoking a response in the reader. Well done.
Thank you so much... Actually this is the first time anyone part from my mother, who has actually praised my work! I'm not usually one to write such sorrowful poetry, but that was the way I felt yesterday and so I wrote it down. It's nice for once to actually feel appreciated. Thank you again, it really does mean a lot to me.
Are there poets
interested in meeting,
forming a friendly
group, greeting
each other every week,
Could it be, that
You might seek
to discuss writing?
In a chat room, writers
could be sharing
their own poems while
others, gently caring,
could respond, never daring
to hurt the artist soul.
For there, the care for art
Would be second to the
Care for human hearts.
Hello! This is actually a real inquiry I wanted to post, and decided to put into verse because . . . well, you know.
Is there interest in having a group meeting in a 7 Cups chat room on a regular basis -- for members and listeners to present and discuss their original poetry?
If you're interested, please send me a message (click on my name below), or Reply below, addressed to @Annie.
Thank you!
P.S. This is just a prelim idea, and I'm not sure how it might fly. But lovely @snowybunny mentioned it might be a good thing, so I'm inquiring.
@Annie, I think it's a great idea! I'd love to participate in something like that.
The poetry is growing with you
I love it, Annie!!! Poetry and songwriting help me escape... A chat meeting would be lovely :)
@NewRomantic677, Yes, poetry and other writing can provide such a MARVELOUS release. It would definitely be lovely to chat sometime.
So far, there have been only 2 people who said they are in favor. But it could still be wonderful, so I'm keeping the idea alive for now.
I've learned that a significant issue would be that teen members/listeners cannot access the same chat rooms as adult members/listeners. And there are teens who would want to attend, as well as adults. Supporting 2 groups, one of each side of the site, might be possible some day.
For now, I guess we'll have to chat here in the Forum.
Nothing Good, Come Easy
The easy road is a hard one
A hard road, it ain't easy
A simple life is never simple
A calm wind is still breezy
A cloudy sky means no sunshine
A sunny day will cast a shadow
It's one of those days I'm losing my mind
You ask me why? The hell of I know
---I think that I think that I figured it out
It's surely a fail when you're without a doubt
And you promised to be there but you probably won't
Take my advice 'cause I probably don't.
Ahh the fingerprints on your mind
Will stand the test of time
Nothing good...come easy!
One verse and chorus
By Me
@lonelydeviantsoul, I really like this song. I wish I could hear it to music.
Enjoy the view, normal people don't get to see it from there No matter where you are on the ladder all the falling pieces have their own perspective
It never ceases to amaze me, the chances that are brought to life here, the odds that people meet, to help each other. From tough times this is a place for instant connections. And everyone here is just here for good
Sometimes you gotta fight the sea while holding the tide, push against the waves and overcome the current
Life is a rollercoaster riding a fine line drawn on the sand, how does it even stay there? Willpower The universe is composed of circles, they overlap yet we can still get stuck in one. Even when the atoms are just circles in molecules and they are just circles to cells, forming a membrane that eventually makes a circuit like our brain. And our brain circulated our blood from which we bleed our heart. The heart is the odd one out. All it does is beat the rhythm of life. Cycling around in,circles If you think about every living things, all those hearts beating to a brain. Even the trees begin to hum
It is alright but yet it is not.. is ok Sure it is not Is happy the truth is not.. What it is.. it is not.. Is not a lie when tried so hard of joy.. is not a lie when tried exhaust all ways.. If try so hard its still gone as the wind blew hard.. it is gone.. Is that a goodbye Rather becoming silent as night fall.. Sorry.. is the word too soft to be heard.. silence appear.. it is gone.. Maybe it is the last.. goodbye.. yet it is hope it is not..
@OnceLostButWillBeFound
This poem is interesting to me. The flow of the words seems to be smooth, then choppy, in an interesting way. I like the uncertainties expressed. Very cool.
TRIGGER WARNING. Self Harm.
Teach me to ensure faith in gratification, to breathea world in no pain. Teach me how to plausibly smile without going insane. This agony I endure is screaming at me I don't know where to turn.God relief me, please. I'm scared, I feel so alone.
Darkness is eloquently enclosing and I can finally hide, people's views and opinions are so distant from mine. Trying to neglect the way they've all mistreated me, a world so vindictive; we are not free to be you and me.
Words like metal breaking through my skin. Bloodshot eyes, justifications lost within. Battered and bruised, not sure where to begin.
I'm finished with it alright, I have to give in. Give in to the damage, give in to the dream. The dream where I perish, and I am decisively free. Your insults have extinguished me; this world has driven me insane. It's unfeelingly cold blooded and merciless, you are all the same.
This was permanantly my most intense fear. You couldn't comprehend; you all laugh inexpressively at me drowning in my tears.
My glacial face is burning, this blade is sharp. What happens next is that I'm left in the dark.
My shaking body lay out on the floor. Wrists crying and swollen, do you even want to hear more?
I apologise Dad, and I'm sorry Mum. I regret never expressing anything that I've done and what's gone wrong.
Hiding the bruises, the tears and the scars. Hiding the lingering detail, always wearing a mask.
This is what they had desired right? They'll be rid of me now, every one of you. Well I expect you'll finally be happy after everything you've put me through.
Separating from what most of you refer to as life. It's over now, I'm safe, It's alright.
I'm shining now, I can be myself. I'm not trapped in a world to be everyone else.
I'm with you, I am. I'm not leaving your side. I love you my baby, just look at the star filled sky.
See my smile?
See my face?
I'm happy now, gone without a trace.
@Marie38, this poem pulls at my heartstrings.
For my unrequited love, I make it just a few minutes ago and I feel like I want to share it here too instead just my blog :)
But I Don't
I could have fall in love with someone that have a handsome feature, someone that I know everyone would get jealous of. Someone that will melt any other girls heart or maybe someone who knows that he's handsome and confident enough with that fact.
I could have fall in love with someone who could text me all day, asking what I am doing, sweetly annoy me with those stupid little conversation. Someone that could make me feel like I'm worth of all the attention in this world.
I could have fall in love with someone who told me I'm beautiful everyday even when I'm having a bad hair day, using my too-large T-shirt. Someone who could make me feel like I'm the winner of American Next Top Model.
I could have fall in love with someone who would have given all his time to listen to me venting or simply ranting about my co-worker, sharing the stressful part of my day, and still think that I'm right. Someone who could make feel as if I'm Miss Always Right.
I could have fall in love with someone who thought I'm the Queen and worship my existence.
I could have....
But I don't....
Instead I fall in love with your voice,
I fall in love with your awkward kindness,
I fall in love with the way you straighten me up and tell me when I'm wrong (even when you annoy me with that),
I fall in love with every moment we share no matter how short it is,
I fall in love with your sudden actions that make me swoon,
I fall in love even when you don't make me your priorities,
I fall in love even when you don't feel the same way
I fall in love despite the hurt I felt.
People say I'm stupid and that I should move on.
Maybe I should
I could have fall in love with someone else
But I don't
By: Minyaa
@Minyaa, this poem is excellent,. I like the contrast between the person she could have fallen for, and the person she did fall for.
@BraveSpirit Thank you so much for liking it :D