OUR ORIGINAL POETRY: Share It Here
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Hello there everyone!
If you're reading this it means that you probably are quite fond of poetry and writing it to. This is a thread to post all and any poetry that you may have, be it happy, sad, angry or just silly. All styles are welcome (free verse, couplets, slam) and it would be great to have at least one poem up a day for all of us to enjoy together!!
![User Profile: KnighTerrAin](http://7cupstearesources.s3.amazonaws.com/listenerImages/k2dnfHuWjpdXl2tuWlaSmpfeX6-lf5jCyg!!.jpg)
Depression is a puddle,
for some it is wider and some it is deeper.
Some it is practically a pool and some an ocean.
And so on.
Even after you step out you will still be wet.
And the air will feel colder;
but it's better than going back
![User Profile: Annie](http://7cupstearesources.s3.amazonaws.com/listenerImages/k5eWnk6YsGKghpicycM!.jpg)
@KnighTerrAin, An incredibly apt extended metaphor! Well Done!!
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No Better by G (1998)
I heard a guy sing a song
He said, "this is a fact.
Every time you take one step forward
You go two steps back".
He forgot to mention
Winners don't give in
Every time I get knocked down
I get up and try again
You can take all my money
Take away my house
But you can't take my freedom of speech
These words out of my mouth
I call it how I see it
But sometimes you've just got to believe it
I believe too many people are living in fear
chorus-
Do you really think someone is better than you?
They'll have you believe it but it ain't true
In the eyes of the lord a sin is a sin
It really don't matter which one it is
Scared to be noticed
For the flaws they have
Scared someone might stop and stare
Point their finger and laugh
Let's get in the open
We're pretty much all the same
There's no point in living our lives in shame
Try something different
Come, shake my hand
Don't fear my tattoos or my haircut
Try to understand
These are just things I like
It doesn't tell you who I am
Try to get to know me
Try to give a damn
![User Profile: Annie](http://7cupstearesources.s3.amazonaws.com/listenerImages/k5eWnk6YsGKghpicycM!.jpg)
@lonelydeviantsoul -- GREAT SONG!!
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Thank you so much Annie. I appreciate that. :)
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I'm a candle eager for the match.
I weep wax.
I'm made of small scents of love and happiness,
and when I burn,
oh the aroma shakes loose from my bones.
I'm a candle in the cold.
A candle forgotten in a rotting box in a black basement in a dying house in the wilderness.
A flame will never find me, save a wildfire to burn this
house down.
I want a match to alight on my tongue.
Oh,
I want to taste the flame as it ignites
and I want the pain to burn me away until I can burn no more.
But again. I'm cold.
I'm a waste of wax rotting in the darkness that I just can't burn away.
![User Profile: NewRomantic677](http://7cupstearesources.s3.amazonaws.com/listenerImages/k2dlfXadjpdVoGxsVluWlZneX696qMeZlg!!.png)
I really love this poem. Alot. I'd love to see more of your work :)
![User Profile: lonesomepoetheart](http://d37v7cqg82mgxu.cloudfront.net/img/7cupsUser.jpg)
You really like it that much? I'd be glad to post more
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Yup. I think it's an awesome poem.
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Hi guys, I'm sorry this one's a bit long. I know it's pretty bad, but I hope someone enjoys it. Thanks for your time and for reading it.
Trigger Warning
Hate to Say Goodbye/Normalcy (Idk what to call it)
I want to go back to when things were normal
Before I drove her so far far away
I have no time machine, I am no magician
Yet here I sit, with simple regret
I must ask myself, what was normal?
Was it before she told me this is goodbye?
When she said she had enough, I was too much to handle
When she told me shed told me before
What Id do wrong, and what I had done
I guess she really is gone forever
Was it before I messed up?
I tried so hard to make her happy
But she thought I wanted more
More than the closest friend I ever had
I guess shes right, maybe I did
Was it before I told her I loved her?
That gut-wrenching fear deep within me
Screamed it was a bad idea
I didnt really listen that time
I guess I didnt want to
Was it before she talked me out of it?
The day I pressed the knife to my wrist
Crying softly into darkest nightmares
Her quiet voice kept me company that night
I guess she didnt want to save me
Was it before I opened my heart?
I told her everything I feared and loved
I wanted to tell someone my story
And I thought she was the one to hear
I guess my words fell on empty ears
Was it before I asked her for her number?
I wanted a friend in my time of need
She was just familiar enough
For me to think she could be someone
I guess I was wrong, I always am
Was it before we first spent some time together?
Among old teammates, the newcomer arrived
She was so beautiful and sweet and funny
I thought Id never have a chance with her
I guess that was the only time I was right
Was it before we met for the first time?
From a distance, she was just another girl
I told myself to keep walking, dont talk to her
I wanted to die, then, and I couldnt hurt another
I guess I should have kept walking that day
There is no before because I cant remember
My life before her, and I cant see one after
Now I lie upon my bed and silently break
My soul and my body deteriorate
I guess she was my only reason to wake
Will tomorrow bring a new light?
All I see is darkness ahead
My first true love just walked away
Without her I would be dead
I guess we should have never met
I am the most foolish of fools
For believing that she ever cared
Maybe I was blinded by loved
But all I see is the perfection of her
I guess I should just let go
As she walked away into the virtual plane
I was left with months of empty texts
Hours or days of talking to her
But still she just walked away
I guess I should have chased after
Now shes gone, shes said her goodbyes
I guess its time I say mine
I wish it didnt have to end this way
But she wont miss me, and nobody else will
I guess… this is goodbye
![User Profile: KnighTerrAin](http://7cupstearesources.s3.amazonaws.com/listenerImages/k2dnfHuWjpdXl2tuWlaSmpfeX6-lf5jCyg!!.jpg)
I feel you
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I love this!
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I believe we have a choice...
I believe only you have the power to make that choice....
Only you have the power to change
I believe in you.....
The same way autumn and fall are the same thing
but entirely different
Your choices could be Autumn
Out there and rarely used
Or they could be like the fall
Easy and common
Whatever it is you chose
i believe that it is the right choice
for you
I want you to see the you
i see
Only then can u discover that
because i care,
you're choices don't just affect you
they mean something to me too!!
So if you are Autumn or fall
There is no doubt that i will be
The winter that stands behind you.
![User Profile: Annie](http://7cupstearesources.s3.amazonaws.com/listenerImages/k5eWnk6YsGKghpicycM!.jpg)
@falsehope44, Thank you for sharing your poem here! I found the last 5 lines to be especially lyrical and beautiful.
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So he held my hand
kind of strange
because my left wrist was laden with scars
his finger brushed against them
their ridges
and edges
and ugly jagged lines
and he smiled
and smiled
and smiled
and we walked on.
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Omg this one AHS so many spelling errors sorry. Its "their ridges" and ugky not uggly lol and because not becasie XDDD
![User Profile: Annie](http://7cupstearesources.s3.amazonaws.com/listenerImages/k5eWnk6YsGKghpicycM!.jpg)
@NewRomantic677, This poem is utterly beautiful.
(I tried to fix the spelling as you wanted, but if I changed something you didn't want -- just let me know and I'll correct it!)
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omg thank you :)
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When a life ends, a light still burns from the nostalgic memories of the past. When there are clouds in the sky and the rain is pouring down, there will always come a rainbow to remind us that through even the darkest of times, the light will shine through to comfort and to guide us so that our memories may burn in death too
![User Profile: Annie](http://7cupstearesources.s3.amazonaws.com/listenerImages/k5eWnk6YsGKghpicycM!.jpg)
@hopefulthinkin37, This poem truly speaks to me. I admire the theme very much!
![User Profile: KnighTerrAin](http://7cupstearesources.s3.amazonaws.com/listenerImages/k2dnfHuWjpdXl2tuWlaSmpfeX6-lf5jCyg!!.jpg)
I'm stuck cycling, circling in a hurricane around the eye of the storm. But all I can feel is the calm before it until it breaks
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Jenga
We are games of Jenga
Simply towers builts of pieces of ourselves
We let people take from us
Somethings they take things of ours
Others they take parts of us
When they take these parts of us
We let them try and put the pieces back
It usually works in the short term, but we
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I've never looked at jenga that way, but what if someone sets it on fire?
![User Profile: eQuatiun](http://7cupstearesources.s3.amazonaws.com/listenerImages/k2ZsfH6UjpdWmmluV1OXmZbeX690fZfHmA!!.jpg)
Then it is burnt.
![User Profile: KnighTerrAin](http://7cupstearesources.s3.amazonaws.com/listenerImages/k2dnfHuWjpdXl2tuWlaSmpfeX6-lf5jCyg!!.jpg)
I haven't had any luck putting dust back together
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@eQuatiun, Amazingly imaginative -- wonderful imagery!!
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I posted this earlier, but I made a few changes and wanted to get some feedback. It's designed to be read aloud, as I'm thinking about presenting it at school (assuming I don't chicken out). If you have any suggestions to make it flow better or make it more meaningful, or maybe any comments as to things I should add or anything that might be considered offensive, I would really appreciate it 😊
Darling please believe me when I tell you you are beautiful
For you can not see the fire in your eyes when you talk about your passions
The way your hands gracefully fly over paper
Drawing out poems, images, whole new worlds
Just to escape the one you are in
Darling please believe me when I tell you you are kind
For although you can't feel the happiness you bring others
You give everything for them
Doing anything to make sure that they
Never feel as broken as you
Darling please believe me when I tell you you are good enough
That your calorie intake does not determine your worth
That the number on the scale does not measure how much you are loved
That even skin and bones will never satisfy your longing to be in control, to be perfect, to be enough
Only you can do that
Darling please believe me when I tell you you are valuable
That you don't need to draw out your feelings in sharp crimson lines
Because the monsters within you do not lie under your skin
But deep within your soul
And the only way to kill them is to let others in
Because blades, lighters, fists, nails, bottles, and pills will only make them stronger
And their words are not true, and their presence is not your fault
But the battle against them can not be won on your own
Darling please believe me when I tell you you are loved
That just because he wasn't strong enough to withstand the whirlwind of passion in your eyes and the roaring oceans in your soul does not mean that you should calm your storm
But strengthen it
Let the fire roaring beneath your skin manifest itself around you
As you learn about your strengths and discover who you were truly meant to be
And those who are truly worthy to be in your presence will dance with you in the downpour
Instead of hiding behind boarded windows
Or worse yet, dampening the inferno inside of you
That was never meant to be quieted