OUR ORIGINAL POETRY: Share It Here
Hello there everyone!
If you're reading this it means that you probably are quite fond of poetry and writing it to. This is a thread to post all and any poetry that you may have, be it happy, sad, angry or just silly. All styles are welcome (free verse, couplets, slam) and it would be great to have at least one poem up a day for all of us to enjoy together!!
I am an ocean, deep and dark
A mystery, a journey for you to embark
Upon, with secrets I keep hidden
For 20 thousand leagues beneath the skin
My sunken treasure lies below
Of tales that only I can know
Don't get to close, these stormy seas
Are filled with lonely refugees
Their ships have sunk, their broken hearts
The storm has ripped their lives apart
The world makes waves crashing in
And 20 thousand leagues beneath the skin
The tide of thought won't let me sleep
For I am an ocean, dark and deep
She is sad,
the girl
with her big brown eyes
she is sad,
the girl
with that wobbly smile
she is sad,
the girl
with her fists all clenched
she is sad,
the girl
with her heart all spent
she is sad,
the girl
with her pain so deep
she is sad,
the girl
whos forgotten how to sleep
she is sad,
the girl
all alone with her memories
she is sad,
the girl
who cant stop worrying
she is sad,
the girl
whose silence is deafening
she is sad,
the girl
whos given up on everything
she is sad,
the girl
whos struggling to breathe
she is sad,
the girl
will you help her please?
This is practically describing my girlfriend! I love this one. Nice rhythm too! Good job!
Memories
Its not people which are hard to let go,
Its the memories left that I have a strong grip on.
I have forgotten all their faces,
but I cannot forget the pain.
Everytime I look back,
the faces are already gone,
but the words,
the scratches,
the caresses,
the kisses,
they all still have the same effect on me.
I wonder if hell could still surprise me.
Dark clouds, gentle skies
Wish I was with you watching the world go by.
Pessimistic lion heart,
you watched me fall apart.
Hearing the rain hit my roof
Thinking when is the storming going to pass
Rocking back and forth
because the call hasn't come in yet
The rain is getting louder
And the room is getting smaller
I can't find the reason why
But the phone starts to ring
Hands are shaking
Like the trees outside this house
Everything goes quite
My heart just stopped
He's gone
No, no,
This has to be a joke
He was just here
I-i-i can't lose him
A scream suddenly rims through my throat
I can't believe how loud that sounded
It feels like the rain just stopped
And the wind increased
There is no air in the room
I guess this is how you feel
When someone that's been in your life gets ripped out
I saw this section of the forum and thought to post my poem (originally it's a lyric for a song I wrote but then scrapped because making the melodies was too hard XD). The inspiration came from Linkin Park songs, hence, the (probably exaggerated) metaphores. I wasn't depressed or sad when writing the song though :3
Here it is:
---V1
shattered promises only bring despair
like crumbled glass, broken beyond repair
i'm letting blood through my mind
i thought everything was meant to last
until i suffered what we had in the past
memories of you i've left behind
---C
leaving me in bones, leaving me alone
leaving me enslaved by your thorns
what is left of you? the things that we've gone through?
pain with no remedy, fragment of memories
---V2
i picked up pieces of you with my hand
and buried them deep in cold white sand
the wound is more than i can take
i stood up and begin to take distance
escaping from memories, denying your existence
cause my insides are about to break
---C
leaving me in bones, leaving me alone
leaving me enslaved by your thorns
what is left of you? the things that we've gone through?
pain with no remedy, fragment of memories
---B
where i am now is trapped in my own imagination
but the light still shines through the window
in the end all that's left is just me
break my chains and unbound me free
---C
leaving me in bones, leaving me alone
leaving me enslaved by your thorns
what is left of you? the things that we've gone through?
pain with no remedy, fragment of memories
Hats on walls,
calls and squalls,
the neighbor dog
is loud.
Toys and books
in dirty nooks
my thoughts and lights
are dimmed.
(By the way, this poem hasn't been edited at all. I just wanted to post it because I hate editing )
Scarlet
And one day,
May the roses bloom.
Sending a red fire across the distance.
The scarlet blood may not be of a bleeding thing,
But of the magnificent buds opening eyes.
And one day,
May the roses grow,
Sending their thorns out to attack the unworthy.
The scarlet blood may not be of a bleeding thing,
But of the magnificent flowers that reach out.
And one day,
May the roses wilt.
Sending their Light far away, to a world anew.
The scarlet blood may not be of a bleeding thing,
but how would we know now?
Lametation for the Common Man
Man, oh men, oh mortal man your true name is sorrow
Thy life spent in short days illuminated by the fear of the next
And the next day spent in fear of death the awaiting God of all
Man thy foolish self will you ever learn
How many days are spent in fear of things that pass
Thy few short days of mortal life, and all will be spent in pointless worry
Man, oh men, oh mortal man your true name is solitude
Thy life spent with thy self, and death spent forever with thy self
Watch as you will stand upon the mountain side
and shout to village below
Hear me world my name is insignificance
And how the world will turn its ears deaf to you o mortal
But note how it shall watch you descend from mountainside
and how it will note the absence of followers
Man, oh men, oh mortal man your true name is selfish
Thy life spent with thyself, with thoughts of only thyself
What good are actions wasted if not wasted upon you
Cry of your insignificance thy foolish man
All know the reason that you weep, for thyself
How many of the short days of life are spent with you
Fear not for in death you will spend eternity with thyself
In eternity perhaps man may realize
Thy name is sorrow
Thy name is solitude
Thy name is selfish
Thy name is human.
The emptiness fills up inside
darkness engulfs from either side
give to the shadow why even try
out of last resorts I close my eyes
that was the moment you came alive