OUR ORIGINAL POETRY: Share It Here
Hello there everyone!
If you're reading this it means that you probably are quite fond of poetry and writing it to. This is a thread to post all and any poetry that you may have, be it happy, sad, angry or just silly. All styles are welcome (free verse, couplets, slam) and it would be great to have at least one poem up a day for all of us to enjoy together!!
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a winding sheet of speckled lightbulbs
shielding the earth at dusk
its the light blanket found
in the galaxies
@funfettifrosting, I like the way this poem is startling and fun.
<3 LESS THAN THREE
I sat in the bathroom weak and quivering. Holding a bottle of pills to my chest, ready to die.
I had planned my suicide for weeks; I had a date, a time and the perfect method.
Until I got a message from you.
It wasnt anything special, nothing philosophical. A heart. You sent me a heart. No persuasive paragraph, no begging or pleading. Just a heart.
It was that heart that made me pick up my phone. It was that heart that made me check my WhatsApp. It was that heart that reminded me that I had one too, one that only beats for you.
I was ready to leave it all behind, I had convinced myself that leaving you would be easy.
But the minute I saw your message my heart stuttered, my eyes watered. The pills suddenly felt heavier, weighed down by the thought of hurting you.
So I put the pills down. Closed the door and sent back;
I was about to do something dumb. Im sorry
I bared my heart to you, and you bared yours back.
Im so lucky to have you and your hearts.
Because it was your Less Than Three that saved my life.
@VoicelessPoet
I wish I had the love like you and the person in your poem share.
Im glad you were saved from yourself in time.
Fragile
Don't ask me how I am
Don't treat me gently
I may be fragile
But I am empty
Don't be afraid
To talk to me
I may be hollow
But I am friendly
I'm not ok
But I pretend to be
It's all an act
But I want to be free
Don't frown nor cry
Don't be sorry
It's who I am
It's what makes me, me
I don't pretend
To be smooth or agile
But I do pretend
That I'm not fragile
@sunnyKite2540
Perfect. I can relate so much!
I always thought,
The river of sleep,
Would wash away my worries,
And rush the past downstream,
Emptying the sediment,
Into a vast horizon of blue,
But when I woke up,
I felt the smog,
Instead,
Rising into the atmosphere,
Coating my lungs with dust,
And as I coughed,
I expelled it,
But as I breathed,
I found myself,
Inevitably,
Inhaling it again,
Submitting to this vicious cycle,
Submitting to the rest of the world.
Dear @saturdaysweaters, I love the images and rhythmic flow of the language.
And the first six lines completely blew me away!
she lay there
not saying anything
not moving
eyes closed
tea cup full of dreams
on the porch
10:00 am
dogs barking
she lay there
not saying anything
eyes closed
smiling
soaking up the saturday sun
@SugarInMyHippieTea
This captures the sheer bliss of a lazy day in the sun. Lovely!
@saturdaysweaters It is vicious cycle indeed! It was so well written
I feel so alone
I am hungry
Yet I do not want to eat on my own
Only if there was someone to share my meals with
I would not be so lonely.
I am in need of a friend
A friend
Just a little friend
To go on with me to the end
I am in need of a friend indeed.
I feel so alone
I am thirsty
I just want someone
With whom I can share a cup o
This poem was very heart warming! Great poem!
@Sailboat9718 This is so clear and I loved the repitition of "I am in need of a friend indeed" keep writing!
@Pureriver55
Thank you!
If you wanted
to date me
I would treat
you like royalty.
Dear @DreamyGirl97, I think this poem expresses what many people feel.
I wonder about the message ....
To treat someone like royalty — does that make us lesser, subservient? Does it mean we are excessively grateful?
I wish more people could comprehend their own wonderfulness. ❤️
Note: I originally wrote this and posted this poem on another site a few years back, and decided to share it with you all on here :) (It's now not published on the previous site anymore though)
A Glorius Day
Blue skies, a single white cloud,
Whatever could go wrong, on such a lovely day?
Planes flying overhead, albeit loud,
And on the freshly cut grass, here I lay.
Passers-by walking around, going on with life,
Just happy to continue living, for one more hour.
A wedding down the road, a man making a woman his wife,
Just a happy celebration, nothing could make it sour.
Dogs are being walked on the park,
Marking their territory on every tree in sight.
Children running around, a burst of energy, a spark
Of electricity, managing to make everyday a light.
The beautiful smells of flowers,
The colours of this colourful, amazing land called Earth
No sight of skyscraping towers,
No sign of a construction site nor a birth.
The sounds of a trickling river,
No cars or big vehicles, destroying the calm.
Waterfall, maybe? A beautiful shiver
Of excitement, leaning against a balm.
Nothing could ruin this amazing day, for once in humanity.
This beautiful world, free of criminals, thieves.
Nothing could turn this around, nothing of insanity,
No tears could wash away this memory, just stare at the leaves.
Turning green again, a new life. Just like for us, a new day awaits.
@rebecca947 this color of font is terribly difficult to see with certain visual issues. Perhaps a darker or deeper color would make it readable.
@inventiveHouse2965
Oh, im so sorry! Thank you for telling me- I hope the change now has made it more readable? Still on the lighter side, but in bold :) xx
@rebecca947 yes, thanks
Dear @rebecca947, the positive lift in the last two lines made me smile.
@Annie
Haha thanks! I forgot I posted on here lol
@rebecca947 It reminded me about The Maze Runner I dont know why! Its puffectly written.
@Pureriver55
aww, thanks so much! :D I have yet to watch the Maze Runner... is it good in your opinion? :p
I wrote this one a while ago, I haven't been able to write poetry or lyrics for a long time.
Oakland
Dirty sidewalks, papers blowing
Streetlight changed but no one's slowing
Broken lights are gently glowing
And smoke starts rising
Lovers talk but no one listens
Elvish runes from snail lines glisten
Friends are gone, but they're not missin'
And embers softly glow
All is quiet; dogs start barking
A slow white ship looks for parking
And graffiti artists halt their marking
As flames start to flicker
Empty bedrooms solemn yearning
Schoolrooms fill, but rare the learning
Broken wheels keep on turning
And the crackling grows louder
Morning light and bells are ringing
Radios cackle with tuneless singing
Playground swings with no one swinging
And the roaring comes to life
Noontime darkness, ashes falling
Children crying, women calling
Tempers flashing, cars are stalling
The inferno rages on
Quiet morning, no birds chatter
Silent hopes, like windows, shatter
And all is gone that once did matter
Dust and ashes and tears.
@Offmytrack, what an amazing compilation of images and interesting sounds in the word combinations!
@Annie I thank you with all my heart. The poem was kind of written about the big fire in Oakland some years ago, and partly from a great, burned out place in my heart. It is wonderful for me when someone appreciates my little bits of art.
Cold wind stings on my face
Black is all there is to see
Does anyone remember me?
My legs hurt with every step
I move carefully yet carelessly
Does anyone remember me?
Dreams, once so dear and daring, are now gone
Along with trust, hope and glee
Can anyone remember me?
I'm but a ghost now,
Wandering through nameless paths,
Free from every shackle, every rope,
As I move further away from my past.
Days come and go so fast,
I'm but a nameless spirit, at last,
Waiting for the day I will leave this flesh,
As I move further away from my past.
I'm a child of duality,
I'm neither A nor Z,
I can't ever know me,
I'm untamed, I'm free.
I'm a child of duality,
I always and never agree,
Is it too much or too little I see?
It is a curse to live like me.
I'm a child of duality,
Confused by normality,
Like you, I can never be,
I trust no reality.
I'm a child of duality,
Complex or absent personality,
At will, I morph what I see,
To fit the eyes of who's with me.
I'm a child of duality,
I'm always who I want to be,
And yet, I'm nobody,
On a quest to find what's missing inside me.
Dear @WhiteWolf96, this poem made me think and re-read. The repetition adds a haunting note . . . .
@Annie
Thank you for reading :)
Home is Where the Heart is
He came to town in the summer, when the ice is supposed to melt
The coldest summer anybody here had ever felt
He entertained us nightly with his stories and his songs
Mostly sang of happy times when he could do no wrong
The bar wasn't much, and the regular crowd
Drank and talked quietly, they seldom got loud
He always kept our spirits up, just the smile on his face
Could warm you like a roaring fire in the old stone fireplace
Seems that he had played for years with a traveling country band
And all he wanted when he died was a guitar in his hand
But he always played a solo, not even a duet
And I wondered if his playing was some kind of private debt.
And I asked him why he came here, why he'd left the sun
He said "Home is where the heart is, and mine has come undone"
I never asked him more than that, but a troubled look appeared
It was three good songs and a pint of beer before it disappeared
He left a few days later, said he heard a wandering call
And he thanked us for the tips we left, the food and drink and all
He said he thought it would be best to leave before the rain
And promised that, if we were good, wed hear from him again
Winter came with spring behindThis last verse written by Iola S. Dunkle, my mother., and summer before long
But no one had the faintest clue of where he might have gone
Gone without a trace, they said, probably gone back home
Somewhere where the sun shines bright, nevermore to roam
But I dont think thats where he is; Id bet my stake on that
And if hes in a place called home Ill gladly eat my hat
For I hear his gentle playing in the sighing of the trees
His lonesome voice is singing in every autumn breeze
His eyes are clearly shining in the crystal skies at night
And though they think Im crazy, Im pretty sure Im right
That he has found another town far from the burning sun
For home is where his heart is, although its come undone.
@Offmytrack I loved how it tells a story. Read it once, it makes less sense :') Read it again and again, it starts making more sense :')
@Pureriver55 Thank you. It kinda popped into my head one night. Played with it ever since.
@Offmytrack I got goosebumps through the last two paragraphs... wow.