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My Poem... just wrote like that.... TELL HOW IS IT???
AllenBro March 26th, 2023


A Gruesome Night

A dark night with Murky sky,

Loneliness spread all around,
As I lie down on bed,
Confused, anxious and depressed,
Tears trickle from my eyes,
I think about the past,
Unraveling deep burrowed memories,
Some a nice one and many a gloomy one,
How certain moments in life,
Floods fear inside me,
Hands trembling, an irritated restless mind,
All because of indecisive actions,
And incurable complexes and disorders,
My mind's bleeding all inside,
Unable to think and process,
But somehow thriving miserably,
Even if this all happens,
There's nothing that can be done,
Except for convincing myself,
To bear the agony for a bit more,
For even this night shall pass by,
Slowly, Slowly, slowly forever,
And there shall be dawn once again.....


-Allen // Alankrit
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Heart4art March 27th, 2023

@AllenBro Thank you for sharing your poem! Poems have a unique way of expressing feelings and emotions unlike anything else.

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AllenBro OP March 27th, 2023

@Heart4art Thanks a lot!!!!!! It really means a lot to me......

March 27th, 2023

@Heart4art true that! it's a creative vent out!

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AllenBro OP March 27th, 2023

@Fristo Really thanks a ton!!!!

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AngelicFall March 27th, 2023

@AllenBro Very nice AllenBro :)

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AllenBro OP March 27th, 2023

@AngelicFall Thanks a lot..... just love the appreciation......

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Emerbliss March 27th, 2023

🌟@AllenBro🌟

This is so an awesome poem. Well written with so much beautiful depths and rising hope . Thank you for sharing it with is us . 😊 ❤️

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AllenBro OP March 27th, 2023

@EmerblisThanks a lot..... no words to describe the motivation I get from the appreciation...

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Emerbliss March 27th, 2023

@AllenBro❤️

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burningRain127 April 1st, 2023

@AllenBro woooooww that’s so deep! I love it!
Babyfruitcake5869 April 19th, 2023

@AllenBro It's so amazing thank you for sharing.
Torean April 19th, 2023

@AllenBro

Hard relate. This is well-written too, thank you for sharing!
neo27 April 23rd, 2023

well written bro........

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AllenBro OP July 11th, 2023

@neo27 Hey thanks a lot and Really sorry for the late reply


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BelovedMe April 23rd, 2023

@AllenBro Have you started to blog your poems!!!

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AllenBro OP July 11th, 2023

@BelovedMe hey really sorry for a very late reply. Ran into some mental issues, so took a bit off from the site.

I haven't started yet properly, but I want to. Just don't know how to.

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BelovedMe July 12th, 2023

Atleast you replied this means alot .☺.. You can create a *** page too as blogging reach is less🐬 compare to *** page reaches... ☄️

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BelovedMe July 12th, 2023

***= I N S T A G R A M

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