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I poem by me :) , do you like it?

reliableCake732 December 15th, 2023

TO MY NON-EXIXTENT LOVER


Hey do you like lakes, 

Then that's the place of our first date;

When one of us is not up, another will make coffee;

I want us to pet our fur baby together, 

Read love hypothesis,

I want my lips to be on yours, 

I want you to make my braids. 

In rainy mornings, our two gray souls will push themselves like magnets;

I wanna stick to you;

Sleep on you shoulders;

Radio songs in backround, we both inside our favourite blanket, just existing♡

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ajfdslsdvosdfjlbgrdjhrogt December 25th, 2023

@reliableCake732 ¡Guau! Even though there is no rhyme, and even though it doesn't sounds like a song.

This is still pretty good.

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reliableCake732 OP December 25th, 2023

@ajdslsdvosdfjlbgrdjhrogt



It's my first poem XDD.



Ty❤️








reliableCake732 OP December 26th, 2023

@ajfdslsdvosdfjlbgrdjhrogt


It's my first poem XD!!


Ty💗👀

amiableBunny4016 January 16th

@ajfdslsdvosdfjlbgrdjhrogt

my friend, a poem doesnt have to necessarily rhyme. 

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reliableCake732 OP September 10th

@amiableBunny4016 actually thnx👀💖

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RuggedHeart December 26th, 2023

@reliableCake732  ❤️

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reliableCake732 OP December 26th, 2023

@RuggedHeart



Ty so much 💞👀

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lamimoon January 9th

I love it.

I recommend you to post them more on Poetry subcommunity! It would be my pleasure to read more!

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reliableCake732 OP January 16th

@lamimoon Ty💌👀


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amiableBunny4016 January 16th

@reliableCake732

this is beautifully written! well done!

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reliableCake732 OP September 10th

@amiableBunny4016 tysm💖

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slowdecline48 September 14th

Perhaps the best free-verse poem I've read on here so far...the sentiment is understated but clear. Very nice work.

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reliableCake732 OP September 19th

@slowdecline48 tyyy💌👀

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