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Cassandra

azurePond October 27th

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They call me crazy  

For what I see,  

For urging them to look  

Past the smiles,  

Past the perfect screens

For screaming my silence  

In this world of endless noise  



I watched my mind burn once—  

Watched my words scatter  

Like ash in the wind.


Now I see minds break,  

Watch lives go quiet,  

While my warnings drift away  

Like spams in the feed.


So I type warnings—  

Threads, comments,  

In pixels that glow  

But remain unseen.


Everyone’s moving fast,  

But not forward,  

Scrolling past fire,  

Past wars

Past a boiling planet



They scroll right past  

The cries for care,  

The quiet grief,  

The broken spirits  

Wrapped in polished tags.


I scream,  

In comments lost,  

Fingers racing like flames  

Across the cold unfeeling keys


They dismiss my words—  

“Too dramatic, too much,”  

Smothering the silent truth  

Under a relentless noise.


Still, I’m here,

A prophet lost in pixels,  

Truth drowned in likes  

And I’m still here,  

Voice cracking like glass

Whispering to the void,  

To the shadows,  


Hoping someday  

Someone  

Finally  

Listen.

  

(PS - The photo is the painting of Cassandra by Evelyn De Morgan. I do not own the art.)
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BastionKnight October 28th

@azurePond

Another excellently evocative piece. I loved the delicious imagery of the similes you used. The whole thing is such a fantastic reinterpretation of Cassandra in the modern age. One feels like we are seeing the prophetess hunched over the screen, typing desperately into the void of an unheeding net. And still perhaps we hear another voice too, (maybe the author?) speaking through the electronic age priestess, uttering warnings that we ignore or disbelieve.

Loved it.

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azurePond OP October 28th

@BastionKnight Thank you ! I appreciate your analysis and your support!😊

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slowdecline48 October 29th

@azurePond

"this world of endless noise" is the most apt description of modern civilization I've ever seen in a single line.

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azurePond OP October 29th

@slowdecline48 hehe.. thank you!

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wIthpeACE Thursday

@azurePond

Another masterpiece Azure! A completely perfect depiction of modern world and its endless claws that trap both readers and the narrators! Good work! :)

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azurePond OP Friday

@wIthpeACE Thank you! I’m really glad the poem resonated with you.

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