OUR ORIGINAL POETRY: Share It Here
Hello there everyone!
If you're reading this it means that you probably are quite fond of poetry and writing it to. This is a thread to post all and any poetry that you may have, be it happy, sad, angry or just silly. All styles are welcome (free verse, couplets, slam) and it would be great to have at least one poem up a day for all of us to enjoy together!!
With a smile that shines like the sun And the freckles that resemble the stars, Hair that's dark and mysterious Just like your cute little scars. Your body is like a galaxy, Every time I look up I see you. Don't let the words people say build up and stick like glue. Your heart is made up of glass that hS already been broken, Perhaps the things that I say were the first things really spoken.
Just came up with this on the spot... not perfect but my thoughts in a short poem at the moment.
Everything is weighting down on me.
Dragging me so far under.
Voices that will never stop.
Tears that continue on.
These thougths have consumed me.
Swallowed me whole.
A once colorful world is not too bright anymore.
A world that was gold had faded to black.
My world filled with madness,
filled with sorrow,
filled with pain,
A world with billions... yet I stand alone.
A dark cloud has followed me everywhere.
Raining on eveything.
It never ends.
It never ends.
....please make it end.
If I neer saw daylight again
Or the sky of brilliant blue
I would be happy, if I still
Could, my dear, see you
If flowers never bloomed anew
If the grass withered away
If you were still within my sight
Id rejoice all the day
If I never saw you again
But many a sunrise
And luscious, green, grass standing tall
And flitting butterflies
I would feel empty, despite all
The beauty around me
For youd be gone, Id be alone
In much misery
-Lucas D.
@ParanoidPoet This is amazing. Your choice of words is brilliant and they fit well with the general rhythm of your poem, and they simply sound wonderful. Great work!
@Cheeney Thank you. I'm glad you liked the poem.
The birds outside my window
Crowed about their woes
Flapped their black feathers
Leaving remnants of nightfall
In the bright afternoon sun
Or was it newspapers
Ink-soaked beaks that cried
For doomsday or salvation
Something to disturb the lull
Of everyday mediocrity
That shed their wings at the door
@StellaFinnoh I like where this went, how have I fallen into this routine of unhappiness?
@Tt33
Thank you :)
Oh, @StellaFinnoh, this is magnificent.
You came into my life like a whirlwind ,
And lifted me off my feet,
Sucked me into your vortex,
Acting like it was a frivolous thing.
So many revelations,
As unforeseen as they may be,
Just brought me closer,
To your charismatic being.
You gave a reason to my living,
And for the first time I found myself feeling,
Self conscious about the way I looked,
On all the days that we were meeting.
I started interpreting signs,
Omens that I never believed in;
Your attitude couldn't be deciphered,
And it left me eternally wondering.
I started picking petals off a rose,
"He loves me, he loves me not",
Imagine my self doing this before?
Definitely not.
Why couldn't you just answer,
Why can't you be sure,
I can't play this game anymore,
It isn't my forte.
You're leaving in a few days,
I won't get to see you like before.
Maybe it's for the good that we're parting,
Maybe I'll find someone like you who could fill up the hole.
You'll be just another memory,
Etched onto my brain,
Just another person,
Leaving me torn and in pain.
The thing that saddens me is that,
I never got to hear your end of this tale.
Storm
Life is a storm at sea
whipping up waves
beating harshly against
the ships that navigate
its dark chaotic waters.
Have courage, sailor.
the storm will pass
and you will live to see it through.
@DearMySanity I like this poem alot. good imagery
Choose a Side
They told you tonight
decide what you want
choose what to believe
but you don't know what it is you want
What should you believe?
all the arguments are so convincing
this is right but so is this,
even though they aren't the same at all.
they want you to choose a side
but you don't hold fully
with either.
So you stood your ground
and bore the weight of their thoughts
They asked you to choose,
but they only wanted you to
stay on their side,
and when you couldn't,
everyone else tried
to pull you apart,
let them each have an arm
he can have a leg,
but for God's sake,
keep your soul and mind.
They're all that you've got.
A thousand fears
Eyes full of tears
No smiles no cheers
Cursing the seers
Who said that the world
Was going to change
Abuses at them hurled
In languages strange
It was still the same,
Still mad, she screamed
Still thirsty for fame
And yet she dreamed
For a hope, for a light
From this hell, to take flight
For a future that was bright
San the wrong, full of right
For something else,
Something good
To correct the wrongs,
The misunderstood
To make a change
As very few would
And thus she stood.
Swing
[prompted by this image]
Withered leaves were blowing in the wind
on this tree that was once a natural king
Here sat a little boy who had sinned
being punished by pain's eternal swing
Moonlight caught the boy's eye
a wonderous sight in these dark days
He had known his time was also nigh
still I doubt he's going to change his ways
He glanced down at the earth below
exhausted from constantly being swung around
With his despair not far in tow
he leapt right towards the solemn ground
Illusion of peace
This illusion of peace enchants the innocents
softly luring them to lower their guard
Why must we continue to fall for its tricks
why must keeping the peace be so damn hard
The exchange of smiles softens their spirit
false pretenses never fail to clouden their mind
Why must we keep on this ridiculous charade
why must true love take forever to find
Though I wonder, maybe it is best not knowing
when many of us are living just to survive
Why must we bare pain and suffering daily
why must obstinacy be the only thing keeping us alive
I switch on my television to watch the news
another attack on humanity darkens our earth
Why must we eradicate precious life
Why must war live in an eternal cycle of rebirth