OUR ORIGINAL POETRY: Share It Here
Hello there everyone!
If you're reading this it means that you probably are quite fond of poetry and writing it to. This is a thread to post all and any poetry that you may have, be it happy, sad, angry or just silly. All styles are welcome (free verse, couplets, slam) and it would be great to have at least one poem up a day for all of us to enjoy together!!
Flowering trees sigh
Happiness will not return
The sun is hiding
(it's a haiku)
@AskAnubis, I've loved haiku since 7th grade when our English teacher introduced us to them.
And this one is excellent, captures the essence of haiku! I love it.
an anthem to silence
people come and go
and ask questions
as if i were interesting
or even important
don't you see
i want to keep my words
words are intimate
leave me silent
will someone come
and just hold me
listen to the silence
it's the only way
see who you are
see who i am
maybe closing your eyes
will help
all those shadows
are you terrified
the monsters are inside you
not under your bed
i will never talk again
They lead me to the edge of hell so I walked myself in
Wow. This speaks to me. So powerful.
Tired of this endless fight.
Can't accept it, cannot hide.
Tried so hard with all my might.
You are glowing, ever bright.
I am blinded by the light.
Lost the struggle, though I tried.
You're no longer by my side.
Threw me in the ocean wide.
By these rules I can't abide.
Marching on with tiresome stride.
Try to end this endless night.
My task, my goal, my oathsworn plight.
Every last inch of my pride.
Out of mind and out of sight.
Holding onto you so tight.
I just cannot change the tide.
A young bird longing for first flight.
My veins scorched, blood burned, all but fried.
One In the Same
Isn't it a crazy thought,that I can stare up at the sky,knowing that you are looking,at the same moon as I.And feel a sense of peace,even when you aren't near,I know my love will reach you,as if you were right here.I really liked this poem! Keep up the great work! ♥
It is a sadness that overwhelms, that surrounds, that pulls you down. It is a sadness in which you can drown. It buries itself in your soul and clutches tight. It floods your veins and fills you up. An impossible sadness with an impeccable grip.
TRIGGER WARNING: Suicide
4/13/14 1:31pm
This one little girl, with hopes and dreams,
starts the day as her smile beams.
No fears no worries, only fun,
and this lucky girls life has just begun.
This young girl is little no more,
as she finds herself bleeding on the bathroom floor.
The years have passed, and she finds no hope
as she heads to the garage to get the rope.
This once little girl had been full of life,
but that barely lasted before she picked up the knife.
For through her life she had been kicked down,
further and further until she wished she could drown.
This now dying girl is standing on her chair,
shes lost all hope, shes in despair.
She starts to smile as she holds her breath,
the last one she takes as she falls to her death.
The words are trapped inside my brain
As with a prisoner locked away in their own house.
They swirl incessantly inside my head,
Banging around till they come out.
But the do not come out as I want them,
They come out as anger, groans and laughs,
As the ramblings of a broken being
The syllables ring out harshly,
Nowhere near the graceful notes
I long to pour from my lips
Only moans are heard, a direct output of my pain
From all this, surely nothing is gained.
Perhaps the insanity only increases
And my happiness?
Without being able to sing,
I soon find that it ceases.
@Aringri, An excellent description of a difficult phenomenon that many people at 7 Cups have experienced! Very perceptive, very well written.
Broken
There's so many things going on in my head
the truth is I want to be dead
because what is life worth
is it worth this pain is it worth
this hate
is it worth feeling like you're
the mistake
feeling like you have no future
I try so hard to live
up to my expectations
that are up so high
but I only fall deeper
in the hole that I've dug
myself
they say it gets better
they say the light will get brighter
but looking up I see no light
not even a glimmer
so deep inside
I want to cry
but why doesn't it
make me any better --
because im the digger.
They say life is what you make of it
I feel like some of us never
had a choice
but I have to keep a
smile on my face
so no one knows
no one sees
how broken
I really am
I wrote this last year.
I like this poem very much. I wish I could put my finger on it, why I find it so touching, but I do. Well done.
TRIGGER WARNING: Abuse
Whoa /-\ this is scary, ahah. But anyway. Here's a poem by Pikachu Maddy.
It doesn't hurt
Anymore
Bleeding out
On the floor
I don't feel it
It's okay
Soon the bruises
Fade away
I'm your puppet
I'm your doll
On my strings
I rise and fall
Here I am
Black and blue
The outside world...
...I wish you knew.
@MaddyIsHere,
This poem evokes the scene and the feelings so strongly that, you're right, it is a little scary. But very well expressed.