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me the object
blueLemon6419 September 25th
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It's 5am and I'm working through something, this is more a rant than anything else. Apologies in advance. Unpleasant, free verse thing maybe a poem. Written this morning but I don't think I will edit it. Unfinished forever. a vent maybe.

TW abuse. potentially triggering, avoid if that's best for you.

Powerless


they hold me

Closer than we should be

Warped affection

piercing holes into my soul

draining me of myself

and replacing it with shame

and all I can do is watch

from the space outside my brain

watching my body be destroyed

powerless to stop it

angry with no voice

enraged with no choice


limbs and head useless

body just a thing to entertain

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September 25th
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@blueLemon6419 This was lovely to read, I loved it all. Thank you for posting this for us to read. 

blueLemon6419 OP September 26th
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@Butterflymoongirl thank you for taking the time to read and comment.

LabeledBPD September 25th
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@blueLemon6419

very powerful blue. I hope you are ok 💛😘

blueLemon6419 OP September 26th
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@LabeledBPD thanks for reading and commenting Holly. Im not but I will be.💛

LabeledBPD September 26th
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@blueLemon6419

you are to me, will be good when you see it within yourself also.

you’ve been through a lot in your life, please be kind with yourself.

I really enjoyed reading, thank you for posting x

LabeledBPD September 26th
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@LabeledBPD

i hate i can’t see the messages im commenting on…. I’ve not a great memory. 

I hope you know that we are all here whenever you think or feel we will aid in even the smallest of ways that will make you feel ok again.

BastionKnight September 27th
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@blueLemon6419

The word choice gives the free verse a very raw feel. I especially like the rhyming couplet near the end as i found it very powerful and relatable (Angry with no voice, Enraged with no choice). I salute your bardic skills.

problematiclife27 September 27th
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It was really awesome

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