Answer Editing Requests

#240400 change there may been - there may be
remove 'only a'
#240401 change fake to take, spelling of failure
#240403 Add capitalization
#240404 Add capitalization
#240406 an - and i - is
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240409- general spelling and punctuation. The first sentence can definitely be cut into two or more sentences.
240442- remove the word 'that' from 'I feel like that if you believe that...'
240446- general spelling and grammar
240447- capitalisation required and general sentence structure
240448- sentence structure
240451- capitalisation and sentence structure
240455- capitalisation on words that don't require them
240456- removal of 'but' from 'Even though it will take time but if you wanna...' and change 'Wanna' to 'want to'
240457- change the plural 'reasons' to singular 'reason'
240458- general grammar and sentence structure
240461- change 'theyre' to 'their'
240464- spelling
240465- spelling
240467- add 'he' to 'stop all communication that (he) has with you' and change 'wont' to 'won't'
240468- capitalisation
240469- cut this sentence into two. 'Taking this step can seem a bit scary because there's always a risk that what if our partner doesn't take it in the way we want them to'
240473- capitalisation and punctuation
240474- change 'writeup' to 'write up' and cut this sentence into two. "Finishing an entire essay in one day is impossible however, by aiming to finish a paragraph each day, it is possible to finish the essay in a week."
240475- change 'your' to 'you're' in "when your not smoking it"

240486- change 'it's' to 'it's' and change 'the' to 'that' from '... and the fact the it has happened...'
240487- remove 'With' from '...a problem with that which...'
240490- 'trying to manage being around to(o) many people...'
240493- change 'effects' to 'affects'
240499- change sentence to '... and it didn't work out...'

@SoulfullyAButterfly

#240137: Good detail of information but needs to check punctuation, sentence structure

#240144: Give examples of types of therapy and who in general they are for but you are showing empathy in your answer which is good J No comma needed after “personally” or “someone new”

Missing word and capital not needed in one place. Some punctuation issues but impactful answer. #240245

#240247 Commas in some places where they are not needed but overall good work.

#240341 3 spelling mistakes. Punctuation needs to be checked. The person seeking support can be directed to acceptance and commitment therapy and anxiety related self-help guides. Sentence structure needs another look.

#240354 spelling mistake in the first sentence. Reconsider the second sentence as a first sentence? Get rid of the word it in the 3^rd sentence. Reconsider phrasing in the last sentence.

#240367 Delete sentence 4. “You've written down everything you needed to already, so no excuses” is a sentence that needs to be softened therefore sound more empathetic. Reconsider the sentence structure and punctuation in the second last sentence. Get rid of the word “cheers”. Overall you make several interesting points but do not mention any organisations the reader can look into for anxiety.

#240455 Full stop needed at the end of sentence 3. Delete sentence 4. Reconsider this sentence “it's completely okay for other people to think that we are lying, that's their problem to think that way not ours”. It may not be okay for the reader however, the reader may want to feel that they can be trusted.

#240461 Pretty good answer but needs a bit more detail. Maybe ask the individual to reflect on what the work was truly like for them the colleagues etc whether it be a good or a bad experience and then put that into perspective with how they want to go about telling their boss they want to leave diplomatically.

#240474: You have some nice ideas in your answer. Watch out for your spacing and always make sure the attention is directed towards the speaker. Pay attention to this in the following sentence:” What I personally do is writeup a list of the tasks I have to do. I then set goals for my self for that week.”

#240493 raises some interesting questions. Perhaps ask the reader to think about how their significant other would feel if they talked or associated with their ex.

#240494 maybe link the first and the second sentence together in some way but change phrasing of first sentence. (“This has happened to me to” to something like this “Having shared a similar experience….” Or “Its completely normal to move on from a relationship that was mainly on good terms and respectable”)

@SoulfullyAButterfly
#240341 Check spelling. The answer needs structure.
#240510 check your spelling.
#240512 raises some interesting questions but maybe link your answer to anxiety and self-esteem. You mention “Friends don’t hate friends” – in some people’s eyes this can be a generalisation – there are toxic friendships too. Some sentences need reconsideration.
#240518 Get rid of the line in the second sentence “In my opinion” Check punctuation. Reconsider this sentence “ in my honest opinion, I believe you shouldn't share this part of you in these vulnerable settings” Is your intention to give advice? You are showing some signs of empathy in your answer which is great J
#240520 Instead of the first sentence perhaps ask them to think about what would happen and how they would feel if they did/didn’t tell or somebody else disclosed their cheating to their partner. You are generating some good questions for the reader to think about but I feel more are needed to make the answer more detailed (maybe look more into challenging to think why they would cheat/ how they would feel if their sig other cheated).
#240526 Get rid of sentence 5.

@SoulfullyAButterfly
#240836 recommend support organisations
#240837 watch out for phrasing in first and second sentence. Add more knowledge to your answer: can mention cognitive distortions and how they influence thoughts and recommend support organisations
#240842 check punctuation and recommend relationship support resources.
#240844 recommend support organisations and check punctuation
#240850 check spelling and recommend support organisations
#240853 Join sentence one and two together and don’t use the word “I” often. Recommend some support organisations.
#240854 Bring more knowledge of BPD in your answer and check punctuation and sentence structure.
#240860 check punctuation

@SoulfullyAButterfly


240378 Spelling


240474 Capital letters

240878- general punctuation, remove 'cup' from "...have a cup proper conversation...".
240881- spelling. Remove 'you'rer' from "constantly thinking you'rer "missing" them"
240886- general punctuation.
240927- general punctuation.
240937- change 'racial' to 'rational' in "...because the racial mind..."
240938- first two sentences can be combined to form one full sentence.Change 'walking' to 'waking' in "What emotions are you experiencing when walking up by feeling nauseous?"
240946- add comma in "If so you should try being gentle". Change spelling to 'extremely' in "extreamly serious"
240949- capitalisation and removal of abbreviation/ internet language. "w/an" should be converted to 'with an', "w/parent" to 'with parent' and "w/o" to 'without'
240958- change "its" to 'it is' and "wont" to 'won't'
240959- general spelling and punctuation
240961-capitalisation
240962- capitalisation. Add a hyphen "...wherever you go, patience..."
240963- Add comma between 'to' and 'it' in "...who I wasn't really close to it felt like..."

241003- sentences could be cut into two or three.
241008- remove "don't" from "If none of the previously listed options don't work for you..."
241014- split the first sentence into two.
241016- change "temple" to 'temper'.
241022- split the last sentence into two.
241031- Fix grammar in the second last sentence.
241032- sentences can be split into two.
241037- shorten this sentence into two or three. "The conscience rationalizes the noise immediately and decides to investigate or write it off, while the subconscious continues to take in more information, whether consciously written off or not or whether the "threat" is there or not and processes it to get you "primed" for action incase there actually is danger, so you can respond quickly."
241039- change "physic" to 'physique'
241041- split this sentence into two "Its draining to be dragged down by the things you have done wrong, you feel bad about it enough in the moment but thinking it later on will solve nothing at all." and change "The things you do wrong can almost be solved." to 'The things you do wrong can almost all be solved'
241042- Punctuation needed in the first sentence. Change "relaced" to 'relaxed'
241053- split all sentences into two or three.
241054- split last sentence into two.
241055- split this sentence into two "I dated someone for 2 years before we decided to part ways, a boy liked me and wanted to pursue me and though at first I wasn't that interested, I found myself flirting back and becoming more interested!"
241062- change "breathe" to 'breaths'
241067- add punctuation to the second sentence and change "as a scape" to 'as an escape'.
241075- change "harm you health" to 'harm your health'.

Non-question - https://www.7cups.com/qa-anxiety-16/i-cant-connect-to-other-people-as-well-as-i-used-to-my-face-feels-numb-and-emotionless-and-u-have-nothing-to-talk-about-i-force-myself-and-fake-a-smile-or-create-conversations-when-im-at-work-8199/
(answer #241145)