Answer Editing Requests

@SoulfullyAButterfly

240036 remove 'about'
240090 change 'Lot to little'
240109 add a comma after 'getting rid of it'
240127 Add apostrophe after if's
240137 Minor spelling errors

Hi @SoulfullyAButterfly
I believe this answer is ready to be approved (#240127).
I have made some changes (It’s natural to think about the "what if" possibilities. It’s human nature. But you have to trust your path and take notice of where it takes you and accomplish your goals regardless of anything. You can do this. As long as you end up where you need to be, those "what if" questions don't matter. If you are constantly tied to what could have been, you'll be less focused on what's going to be. You can't go back and change anything, but you can change your future and rebuild and grow. Don't lose hope, we all make mistakes and do things we wish we could change, but it is part of learning and growing.) to the orginial answer (We always think about the "what if" possibilities, it's human nature. But you have to trust your path and take notice of where it takes you and accomplish your goals regardless of anything. As long as you end up where you need to be, those "what if" s don't matter. If you are constantly tied to what could have been, you'll be less focused on what's going to be. You can't go back and change anything, but you can change your future and rebuild and grow. Don't lose hope, we all make mistakes and do things we wish we could change, but its part of learning and growing.)

@SoulfullyAButterfly

#240137: Good detail of information but needs to check punctuation, sentence structure

#240109: Can talk about interventions for depression, coping mechanisms, support groups resources, needs more detail.

#240152 delete 2nd the reason and why.
#240166 Replace so is exercide with exercise with as well as exercise

240157- sentence structure

240164- spelling

240173- spelling

240175- spelling

240178- punctuation

240182- spelling

240186- spelling

240187- spelling

240189- spelling

240195- spelling

240199- grammar

240206- spelling

240208- spelling and grammar

240209- great answer but spelling

240210- spelling and grammar

240212- minor spelling

240220- minor spelling

@SoulfullyAButterfly

240147: leave things open to debate don’t make conclusions such as “I think” statements

240149: Too much focus on the writers personal life and what they did in the situation. Needs a more emphatic approach.

240150: First four lines are opinionated and do not accept what the person is going through as being wrong. The last half of the answer sounds better but overall more empathy needed in the answer. Maybe good to mention that the individual may have a lot of confusion and questions in their mind about what they feel or what their partner feels.Grammar is ok.

240151: Full stop needed and get rid of fire.

240152: Start with an empathic statement such as it must be disheartening for something you believed so much in like a relationship to end. Some sentences need to be shorter to sound more impactful. Don’t use the word “suggest” as it sounds like you are giving them advice.

240162: First half needs to sound less like the writer is talking about a personal experience. Maybe good to start with “I understand what it feels to have difficulty feeling motivated. If you have questions you can ask yourself to reflect on who you are grateful for and what you are grateful for. Second half of the answer is better “Looking from a birds-eye view, I can better see why I am doing a task at the moment that may seem difficult or slow-going and be proud of all the other work I've done to get me here. I also find it helpful to break up my tasks into micro tasks so I can always feel a tiny bit of progress: For example, if I have an essay to write, my checklist won't just be 'write my essay' it will be 'make a google doc', 'think of a title', and 'think of an outline'. This makes the process much more rewarding and easier to tackle! Good luck staying motivated, and reach out if you need someone to listen about how difficult motivation it can be–that is what we're here for!”

240173: lest instead of least

240175: Spelling mistakes and some punctuation errors to improve but overall great answer

240178: Rephrase first sentence and replace “That” with “Having different opinions. In the next sentence after that get rid off the word “That” and make the word “agreeing” into Agreeing.

240173: Comma in the second sentence needs to be removed.Mention resources the individual can access from 7cups and any sexual abuse helplines.

240182: Colons or brackets maybe needed to explain that there are two ways. Some sentences don’t require a full stop and need to be continued.

240186: Punctuation and sentence structure in sentence 3,4 needs some work

240187: Commas are not needed and there is one spelling mistake

240189: Reconsider an potential empathic statement to the answer (I can really hear you when you say you find it difficult to stop thinking about your ex as being in this situation I found it neither a quick or an easy fix). Replace “Picking” with “Pick”. Commas are not needed.

240195: “You may find getting over people easily is a good or a bad thing for you individually” can be used as a first sentence.

240208: Missing word in the last sentence and there needs to be question mark in certain places.

240212: Spelling mistake but can mention what type of therapies are available to treat this fear of abandonment and they can maybe give info on bipolar disorder.

240223: Lovely answer but need to look at grammar.

240224: Needs to check sentence structure in sentence 2 and 5 and reconsider the last line as it does not sound empathic.

240225: Show that you cannot give advice dont tell.

240226: Think about punctuation and sentence structure in sentence 3.

240227: Needs to get rid off comma in the first sentence but otherwise good answer

240228: Include a line about why others put others happiness before their own first. There are commas in places where they are not needed. Mention something about boundaries, assertiveness for more detail and some recourses relating to confidence and self-esteem.

@SoulfullyAButterfly 240147: leave things open to debate don’t make conclusions such as “I think” statements

240149: Too much focus on the writers personal life and what they did in the situation. Needs a more emphatic approach.

240150: first four lines are opinionated and do not accept what the person is going through as being wrong. The last half of the answer sounds better but overall more empathy needed in the answer. Maybe good to mention that the individual may have a lot of confusion and questions in their mind about what they feel or what their partner feels.Grammar is ok.

240151: full stop needed and get rid of fire.

240152: start with an empathic statement it must be disheartening for something you believed so much in like a relationship to end. Some sentences need to be shorter to sound more impactful. Don’t use the word “suggest” as it sounds like you are giving them advice.

240162: First half needs to sound less like the writer is talking about a personal experience. Maybe good to start with “I understand what it feels to have difficulty feeling motivated. If you have questions you can ask yourself to reflect on who you are grateful for and what you are grateful for. Second half of the answer is better “Looking from a birds-eye view, I can better see why I am doing a task at the moment that may seem difficult or slow-going and be proud of all the other work I've done to get me here. I also find it helpful to break up my tasks into micro tasks so I can always feel a tiny bit of progress: For example, if I have an essay to write, my checklist won't just be 'write my essay' it will be 'make a google doc', 'think of a title', and 'think of an outline'. This makes the process much more rewarding and easier to tackle! Good luck staying motivated, and reach out if you need someone to listen about how difficult motivation it can be–that is what we're here for!”

240173: lest instead of least

240175: spelling mistakes and some punctuation to improve but overall great answer

240178: rephrase first sentence and replace “That” with “Having different opinions. In the next sentence after that get rid off the word “That” and make the word “agreeing” into Agreeing.

240173: Comma in the second sentence needs to be removed.Mention resources the individual can access from 7cups and any sexual abuse helplines.

240182: Colons or brackets maybe needed to explain that there are two ways. Some sentences don’t require a full stop and need to be continued

240186: Punctuation and sentence structure in sentence 3,4 needs some work

240187: commas are not needed and there is one spelling mistake

240189: Reconsider an potential empathic statement to being the answer (I can really hear you when you say you find it difficult to stop thinking about your ex as being in this situation I found it neither a quick or an easy fix). Replace “Picking” with “Pick”. Commas are not needed.

240195: “You may find getting over people easily is a good or a bad thing for you individually” can be used as a first sentence.

240208: Missing word in the last sentence and there needs to be question mark in certain places.

240212: Spelling mistake but can mention what type of therapies are available to treat this fear of abandonment and they can maybe give info on bipolar disorder.

240223: Lovely answer but need to look at grammar.

240224: Needs to check sentence structure in sentence 2 and 5 and reconsider the last line as it does not sound empathic.

240225: Show that you cannot give advice dont tell.

240226: Think about punctuation and sentence structure in sentence 3.

240227: Needs to get rid off comma in the first sentence but otherwise good answer

240228: Include a line about why others put others happiness before their own first. There are commas in places where they are not needed. Mention something about boundaries, assertiveness for more detail and some recourses relating to confidence and self-esteem.

240229: Give some info about the symptoms of depression. Reconsider especially the first and last sentence in terms of structure and punctuation and mention sites centred towards helping those with depression.

240231: Can do with shorter sentences. Can recommend organisations centred towards relationship troubles.

240254- spelling and grammar

240255- change "Dear Doctor" to "Your doctor"

240257- spelling

240259- remove comma from "of any, one goal"

240263- punctuation

240264- spelling

240265- spelling (Also has suggested other app names)

240270- spelling. (Also has suggested other site names)

240271- spelling and delete the spaces before the full stops.

240274- spelling

240275- change 'gonna' to 'going to'

240278- spelling

240281- spelling

240282- spelling and too much punctuation

240287- spelling

240294- spelling

240328- change 'in a chaos' to 'inner chaos'
240329- capitalisation and removing 'a' from 'it's a start small'
240330- has good information but also some unnecessary information to be removed.
240334- change 'Tyr seeing' to 'Try seeing'
240336- grammar throughout
240339- spelling, punctuation and grammar throughout
240340- change 'staring to think' to 'starting to think'
240341- spelling throughout
240344- change 'there a need' to 'there is a need'
240345- first sentence can be broken into two for ease of reading.
240350- change 'there's could be many' to 'there could be many'. Also, the last opinion at the bottom isn't necessary.
240354- spelling throughout. Middle part of examples not necessary to the question.
240356- spelling throughout
240357- spelling
240358- change 'can;t' to 'can't'
240361- grammar and punctuation
240363- spelling
240364- spelling of 'destruction' as 'distraction'
240366- spelling of 'destruction' as 'distraction' and other spelling errors
240367- change 'weather' to 'whether'

240377- punctuation and spelling
240378- spelling throughout
240382- spelling throughout
240385- 'despair' instead of 'dispair'
240388- 'you're' instead of 'your'
240389- 'our whole body' instead of 'out whole body'
240391- 'I started off' instead of 'I started of'
240398- 'the love you seek' instead of 'the look you seek'