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What are your favourite writing tips?

ο»ΏWhat are your favourite writing tips?

I feel that my writing skills have declined over time, as I haven't been practicing as much lately...
I want to be able to write more concise and brief, instead of long, purple/flowery prose(?)...It's difficult sometimes for me to transfer from one topic to the next an can sound incoherent or random next.

Even my text messages are too long... I don't know how to express myself very well and end up over explaining things (which is a bit trauma related and also I speak a couple of different languages, so sometimes I have to shift gears on how I talk but hey look at me...overexplaining right now...).

I used to think I was decent at writing in English, but it has regressed over time, and I haven't really been observing the world around me anymore...

Anyhow...Just wanted to see if you have any tips you can impart onto me?Β 

I have issues with the following and need some help:

* Writing long, paragraphs that sometimes don't mesh well
* Overexplaining
* Overuse of parenthesis
* Overuse of adjectivesΒ 
* Overuse of words such as "however", "anyhow", "also", "but", "despite this", and "apart from that" at the beginning of the sentence. (I guess "conjunctions" might be the word? Maybe not...I think conjunctions are "but", "and", and "or"...Can't remember what it is called...I use it as a cheat if I don't know how to gracefully switch topics, but it sounds annoying sometimes...I guess I have the habit of putting "dependent clauses" before the "independent clauses"?)

I really want to improve my English to the next level. Any tip is helpful(formatting included -- trying to make it easier for the reader to read), thank you!

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Heather225 June 17th

@ImpudentIncognito

this is a good post and i struggle similarly so i'll give this a bump!

kindbubbles3420 June 18th

@ImpudentIncognito

Thank you so much for sharing here on 7cups. I'm not sure if my tips will work with casual chatting and texting, but I use it to write dialogue and conversations in novels. To make your situation as close as possible to a novel, we can imagine a novel with a main character that uses texting, and they want to write a message to someone, and it's from the first-person perspective. I firstly write the message normally ( it doesn't matter how long, short, good, bad, etc... it is) and then I switch to the other character (the receiver) and since it's a first-person perspective, I switch to the other character completely, and I think about my current status, my relationship with the main character (the sender), the time I will receive the message, the actions or situations that will happen before receiving the message and will affect my reaction to it. After i answer all those questions, I get many scenarios of how the secondary character (the receiver) will react. I then think about what impact I want from this message? Do I want the main character to irritate the secondary character? Annoy them? Just be polite to them? Share information? Be kind? And after I choose the impact I want, I choose the scenario that includes the actions and situations that will happen to the secondary character before receiving the message and will help get the reaction I want (which is something you can't do in real life, because you can't decide what will happen in others life). And then, the last touch, I edit the message choosing the right words to get the reaction I want (e.g. if I want the main character to irritate the secondary character, i will choose words that the secondary character find irritating, and I will delete the parts that seem to be kind - so that way I delete the unwanted or additional parts), and (but that's more common in novels and may not work very well in real life) I try choosing symbolizing words or phrases and include them in the message so I can recall a situation that happened earlier in the novel where the exact same word or phrase had been used and that situation had an impact on the main character, or both the main and secondary characters. I hope you find this useful πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

I hope all the best for you. And remember, it's never too late to improve or learn. You can always learn new things and help yourself improve your skills. Keep growing and being the amazing you πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

slowdecline48 October 30th

Try using Ernest Hemingway's trick: treat everything you write as a ***. Back in the days before the Internet, easy access to electricity, etc., long-distance communication was by ***. With telegrams you paid by the word. So the longer your message was, the more it cost you to send it. Who wants to spend money unnecessarily?

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slowdecline48 October 30th

Note to @Heather225 & @Glen: why is ***.gram a prohibited word?... *smdh* It has other meanings besides social media, for god's sake.

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