a list of peoms

Flashy lights, starry nights

Clashing for which is more bright

Pity to miss such a sight

City lights always winning

Guess ill go back to writing

@ayeyaeyaaaaaaaa

this ones really cool although I feel the flow gets a little mess up in the ending of the last 2. The ending to light nights sight all sound the same, so I think changing writing to write and changing the other ending to somthing with the same sound would be pretty cool. But it’s also important to remember this is our writing, and if in the way you write it you find it best go for it!

@Astraeuss

example

Flashy lights, starry nights

Clashing for which is more bright

Pity to miss such a sight

City lights always top the fight

Guess ill go back to write

@Astraeuss

Wow! You're pretty good at this, i absolutely agree, ill try look out for it in my next ones, thanks!! 😁😁

@ayeyaeyaaaaaaaa

Time's a mythical thing,

doesn't care to hear whines,

sometimes it feels like im on a string,

I wonder what crimes brought me here,

wish i could have a beer,

Been saying "im fine", thinking

Well maybe I'm just out of time

@ayeyaeyaaaaaaaa

Friendship, a real time skip.

A trip with much laughter.

While it feels like a blip.

You'll know its genuine after.

Just being with them's a win.

You'll be free, so rather.

Be proud, nothing else'll matter.

@ayeyaeyaaaaaaaa

Grief-stricken, got no mission.

Addiction, fueled by hate-driven.

Anger-given, opposition.

Wish i could forgive them.

But im in no condition

@ayeyaeyaaaaaaaa pls read poets and poems on poetizer app

@ayeyaeyaaaaaaaa

Wild flower, with smiles that empower

You're a high-flyer, take it with pride

Big strides, you wont let it slide aside

Blossoms when its time to shine

Im inclined to rhyme, but its you're turn,

Trust me you'll be fine 😁👍

I am ae, please end me
I am not free, you see
I let out some steam
Since this tree of life
Fills me with but strife
Make it serene, put me in an endless dream
I feel not alive you see
Yet now i feel ecstasy
I am finally let free of me

@ayeyaeyaaaaaaaa

i really like your writing and really like reading them (: keep it up