a list of peoms
Give a rating out of ten for each and please tell me what i could be improve on
Flashy lights, starry nights
Clashing for which is more bright
Pity to miss such a sight
City lights always winning
Guess ill go back to writing
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this ones really cool although I feel the flow gets a little mess up in the ending of the last 2. The ending to light nights sight all sound the same, so I think changing writing to write and changing the other ending to somthing with the same sound would be pretty cool. But it’s also important to remember this is our writing, and if in the way you write it you find it best go for it!
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Time's a mythical thing,
doesn't care to hear whines,
sometimes it feels like im on a string,
I wonder what crimes brought me here,
wish i could have a beer,
Been saying "im fine", thinking
Well maybe I'm just out of time
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Friendship, a real time skip.
A trip with much laughter.
While it feels like a blip.
You'll know its genuine after.
Just being with them's a win.
You'll be free, so rather.
Be proud, nothing else'll matter.
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Grief-stricken, got no mission.
Addiction, fueled by hate-driven.
Anger-given, opposition.
Wish i could forgive them.
But im in no condition
@ayeyaeyaaaaaaaa pls read poets and poems on poetizer app
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Wild flower, with smiles that empower
You're a high-flyer, take it with pride
Big strides, you wont let it slide aside
Blossoms when its time to shine
Im inclined to rhyme, but its you're turn,
Trust me you'll be fine 😁👍
I am ae, please end me
I am not free, you see
I let out some steam
Since this tree of life
Fills me with but strife
Make it serene, put me in an endless dream
I feel not alive you see
Yet now i feel ecstasy
I am finally let free of me
@ayeyaeyaaaaaaaa
i really like your writing and really like reading them (: keep it up
