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Written to you

BastionKnight October 28th

Hello there you, I'm pleased you're here, and thankyou for your time.

It tickles as your eyes stroke by and comfort line by line.

My name is Poem, I was created.

Each syllable has been dedicated.

Words tasted, chose, then concentrated.

Collated just for One; "But who?"

A few more words along you'll see, that One in fact is You!


I'm guessing from that confused look you think "It can't mean me?"

But be assured as you read on, that I was formed for thee.

Keep reading; in this we are together,

As sunshine sparkles through horrid weather.

You aught to know you are a treasure.

Something you might not hear enough.

So think on me, this ode to you, and smile when times are tough.

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akunknown October 28th

@BastionKnight

Beautifully written poem. Thank you for sharing with us ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

I’d like it if this entire poem was on shirts bc I think if clothes are gonna have written statements on them, poems like this will be more motivating and helpful for people instead of those shirts that say things like “I’m With Stupid!” and useless statements like that. 

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BastionKnight OP October 28th

@akunknown

What a very kind thing to say. Thank you for your supportive comments, they are very much appreciated. Perhaps we may see some of your poems here in the future so we may enjoy them?

*smiles*

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akunknown October 28th

@BastionKnight

You are most welcome! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Regarding posting some of my poems in the future I’m currently TBD as I’m still thinking about it. 

If I decide to post them you’ll know I decided to by seeing the posts of my poems in the forum :) 


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azurePond October 29th

@BastionKnight What a wonderful poem! The structure you’ve chosen creates a captivating visual journey that draws the reader in from the very first line. Each stanza flows smoothly, like a gentle current, guiding us through your thoughts.  I love how you celebrate the reader’s worth, transforming the act of reading into a shared moment of joy.  I’d love to see more of your work!

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BastionKnight OP October 29th

@azurePond

Thank you for your encouragement and very kind words. But in this case, I only posted it...Poem did all the talking. I guess it felt that maybe the people reading it might need to hear that they are special now and again.

I appreciate very much your feedback, and hope that it made you smile as you read it. 

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blueLemon6419 October 29th

@BastionKnight I appreciate this poem. Lovely writing and uplifting. Thank you for sharing it with us.

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BastionKnight OP October 30th

@blueLemon6419

Thank you for reading it, I am very touched by your message of encouragement. If the poem pleased, then I am pleased *smiles* 

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wIthpeACE October 31st

@BastionKnight

I smiled as I read this, Knight! A wonderful homage to all readers out there..

I might want this all to myself 🤩but that is the beauty of this poem- written to all yet none at all!! 😁 [Quite cheeky there, Knight! *wink*]

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BastionKnight OP October 31st

@wIthpeACE

*Bows* If it speaks to you, then it is to you it is talking. It is very gratifying to hear that it was received as I had intended it. And I am always thrilled if something I put here can make someone smile. I think it only fair for all the times others have done the same for me.

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