Whims of Winter
Whims of Winter
Every windy water chill
Will skate and catch all snowbirds
Around so they are between
Always cold chinook prime curlers
A whistler here once was known
Though snow
Has fierce give to him
Make ice of smoke
Too I come as must
Riding on hug
& freeze at kiss
My polar cowboy
Trap me like this
@calmMango9611 @BastionKnight @blueLemon6419 @SolitaryBird @DRHerrington @CheeryMango
Thought it might help to tag some friends I know have enjoyed my past poetry 💜💐
@TheSunIsUpTheSkyIsBlue Thank you very much for the tag ans thank you for sharing thia Sun💛 It feels very lyrical and gives me a sense of longing.
@blueLemon6419
Thanks for taking the time to read it bluey. I love the idea of it being attached to music
@TheSunIsUpTheSkyIsBlue
There is something very intangible about your poem. The juxtaposition of themes of cold and heat makes me think of paradoxical moments of intimacy and emotional detachment, with lines such as "cold chinook prime curlers ", "freeze at kiss", and "My polar cowboy Trap me like this".
I enjoyed reading it, and hope this is a trend of seeing more of your poems shared. Thank you.
@BastionKnight
It is quite intangible, isn't it ? I see where you're coming from..