Love Poetry I wrote randomly
O stupid heart!
Why do you love?
When you know that
He's never gonna be yours
But someone else's.
Oh stupid mind!
Why do you let?
My heart win over
When you are sure that
She makes no sense.
And my dear soul!
Why must you bend?
To my heart's will and
Fall too hard for him
In this insane love.
How's itttt? Ofc it's not totally random, it's about someone...
Luv, <3
Karia_Athena
@Athena108 I love how this poem captures that inner conflict—heart wanting what it can’t have, mind knowing better, but the soul still falls for it. It’s a really relatable, messy feeling, and you’ve nailed that tug-of-war between emotions. So simple yet powerful!
@Athena108
A beautiful piece. Unrequited love is such a fertile and powerful topic, and you have captured it's desperate longing wonderfully. It sounds like a soliloquy, and is loaded with pathos without seeming melodramatic.
Keep them coming.
That's a lovely one! I'm curious, what inspired you to come up with this idea?
@Serenity824
Hehe, great question.
It might have involved a humongous crush on a senior who might have forgotten me by now....
@Athena108hmm ha