Caged Rage and Shadowed Tears
How dreadful is this rage,
Like my eyes closed in a cage.
Love and violence—an uneasy pair,
A mystery, a shadow, a lingering despair.
A battle rages within my soul,
Aggression swallowing what once was whole.
Simplest pleasure in deepest pain,
Harmony lost in a feral refrain.
In the eyes, unshed tears reside,
A heart that fought, but now must hide.
Was he the one, the home I knew?
Now just a ghost I wander through.
Decisions firm, but hearts still break,
Promises shattered, the soul's mistake.
Brutality blooms where love once grew,
A cage of rage I can't break through.
@cocosand
Wow! Great poem coco..awesome description..
Hope all good coco
@patientWriter703 Hey thanks, yes all fine, it is a pretty old poem of mine, moving forward to post more of my work here in coming days <3
@cocosand
Im glad you're fine..it was quite a scare yest
@patientWriter703 Thanks for your concern :)
@cocosand
A very nicely crafted poem. I appreciate it's savage emotion. The tight rhyme scheme and consistent energy makes the whole piece feel tense and strained, as if suppressed feelings are only barely held in check.
@BastionKnight Thanks knight, you explained really well :)
@GrimSox I appreciate you liked it, Poha😊
@cocosand uggh, fine... now listen to the madhya pradesh state anthem
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MMW0oqen1lc
@GrimSox a contemporary anthem! m lovin ittttt, uff the vibeeee
@cocosand shuddering at the horror of you guys unironically liking it 😵
@cocosand
this is a great poem
@twerp Ayo, thank you :)