A Message To The Community
A message to the young,
A message to the old,
A message to the hurt, hurting,
To the shy and to the bold,
A message to the insecure,
The tired, and rightly so,
To those ill without a cure,
To those who wait to go,
A message to the hopeful,
Smiling rays of sun,
And a message to the pained
Who in terms of hope have none,
A message to the confused,
And also to the wise,
To those feeling bemused,
To those of silent cries
A message to the people
Hiding in the crowd
And to the ones on stage,
Voicing themselves out loud,
A message to every type
Of person, known or not
As there is pain, there's goodness
You only need to give some thought
Let your eyes follow the children
Helping tie each others shoes,
Let your mind think of the kindness
That doesn't make it to the news,
Take some time, close your eyes
Think of good, it may take a while
Holding the door, a compliment,
Helping and learning and teaching to smile
Love, kindness, care and so
We think these are what we don't intimately know
A message to those who are learning to grow
Our hearts, of kindness, tend to overflow
- unassumingEyes
@unassumingEyes
Aw this is such a masterpiece! Soooo well expressed. ❤
eyes😭this is so random. I know I already replied to this but I feel like then it was just yk saying it to say it but I actually took the time to read it right now and eyes you’re actually so good you’re so good at like- rhyming but not just rhyming like rhyming so beautifully and with meaning and it all makes sense i love this sm I love how this poem beautifully captures the spectrum of human experience reminding us that- everyone carries their own burdens while also being capable of kindness and love🩷I love how your words inspire hope and encourage us to recognize the goodness around us even when we’re going through a hard time <3 I love the structure and how you use the repetition of “a message to” because it creates a sense of inclusivity and universality so that anyone reading can find themselves in the lines and how you balance the heaviness of pain with these bright moments of kindness its such a beautiful reminder that we all have our struggles but there’s also so much love and compassion out there if we take the time to look for it💗ergrgegehgh also I did save the poem to my notes then and my dad was going through my device and saw it xD but he didn’t say anything I’m guessing he loved it too
ahhhshhdh anyways love you eyes omg you’re so talented what❤️I know you’re busy probably and you’ve got a lot going on so I won’t be like oh why’d you stop you should write more like I can’t talk I post every couple of months but I just know you’re capable of crazy amazing stuff and that’s enough I don’t need to see anymore xD♥️
@iloveyouxx omg thank you so much this made me smile so hard 🥹💗
I want to write more like i genuinely want to write more but my brain is just sad and im sad and tired and nowadays all i can think about is how i miss everyone like every amazing person in my life including you guys are not there rn and i dont want to write depressing stuffs-
and i keep feeling like my writing is so bad like this made me feel so much better about it 🩷🩷
like genuinely i keep wanting to reread your reply and omg you saved it someone saved my poem you specifically saved it wow-
thank you 🩵
