Writing prompt: "I can show you my world"
Hi guys! How are you today? I'm bored again but I have a writing prompt idea! Let's make a poem that start with "I can show you my world"
My poem:
I can show my world
I don't know how to explain it
But can you tell me when did you last run and play outside?
I can open your eyes
To see compassion and empathy
You know some things are not what you actually think it is
I can understand your world
Even if I don't know what you're feeling
At least I can listen and respect you with my heart
@Aileen1114117 What lovely writing, thank-you for sharing with us.
Listening - One Step At A Time!
I will take this challenge! I love you entry as well, thank you for sharing!
I can show you my world
I can show you my world
I can tell you what I've heard.
I can place you in my shoes
If that is what you'd choose.
Ive abandoned my dreams in pursue of peace
Ive made my goal to simply cease.
Ive switched excitement for the mundane
Purely just so I can stay sane.
I plan every minute; of every day
Its all written down, but not much to say
My world is simple, boring and plain
All for the sake of removing my pain.
Yet even though, I dont have much to show
My true goal, is simply to grow.
I may not be adventurous and care free
Yet I believe my world is just perfect for me.
I can show you my world if you open your eyes
Look at me closely you'll see am not so bright
I cracked long ago
And now my world is bright
I can show you my world if you open your eyes
But I think you already know it. Round 2?
I can show you my world
The pain and the scars
The insecurities and imperfection
The less pretty things people try to hide
The kind of openness only a few can offer
But it might not be the world you want to be in
Cause our world might be
A complete opposite of each other
And you might run to the hill
The moment I open the door
So I plant some seeds before the door
So that you can see
A beautiful flower can grow
Even in a broken environment
And anytime you feel like seeing how the flower bloom
Come and enjoy the exquisite beauty
I'll leave the door open for you
In case you wanna know
What lies behind all those beauties
Maybe one day you'll see
It's not as bad as you thought it would be
@Litepanda
Panda, this poem is so deep and profound. I really like it 👍
@Aileen1114117
Thanks for sharing 👌💛
I can show you my world
Only if I take out my eyes
And shove them into your sockets,
For my explanation would take too much time.
Biases would make everything
Seem worse than it is
And my memory is as effective
As a hit to a rock from a fist.
So my eyes are now yours,
They say they are the windows to the soul
So perhaps you can make more use
Of it than even my greatest goals.
I can show you my world
If I could just get this camera angle right
If only I knew how to show myself in the same light that I saw that happen
Rather than this stuipid glare of hindsight, like nothing ever mattered
Or this darkness of depression, making everything mudied, by uselessness
And then a sparkle of manic times, just as sitting inside a fire, but i can’t feel the heat
I wish I could see my world too.