@JustCory88 oh then that's strange🤔🤔 did you add trigger warning? Make sure if your poem is about abuse to not go into too much detail, maybe. Otherwise I really don't know. Sorry
@Tinywhisper11 ya it was saying if I was thinking about harming myself or others to contact someone. But the only thing relative to that is me speaking in third person as if the addiction I was going through at that time in my life was a person and I was acknowledging it wanted me dead. It's poetry do they not realize poetry is an experience the writer lived and it isn't subject to objectivity?
@JustCory88 ahhh! That's why. Somehow your gonna have to leave out of rewrite any part that might make you sound like your in danger of a crisis. Hopefully not to ruin your poem you can just change a few words
@JustCory88 can you think of a creative way to replace words that rhyme with the word you wanted to use so we can hear it? Example for su*cide could be slewer slide idk lol