My frist poem
Hello all,I have been writing poetry for a few months as part of my therapy and I would like to share my frist poem. It is about how negative my life an seem to be. I hope you enjoy
Darkness
A darkness surrounds me
Like a blanket it smothers
No stars or moon
Complete and inky
This forever night
That eclipses all of me
How I long for the light,rays of freedom to shine upon my face
And for the shade that holds me in place
To fade without a trace
How i dream of the day when my soul is free to take flight
mind to wonder with thoughts of delight
And emotions unshackled form the shadows of doubt
Will forever shell I be swallowed by this darkness? Or shell one day i be free
@wolfman77 wow what a wonderful poem you should keep writing i might even change peoples lives with your poems
Thank you, for the compliment. Poetry has doe sure changed my life and I would honored if my work changed someone else's
@wolfman77
I enjoyed it, please keep writing 😀
@wolfman77 open your wings
Leave the holding tree
Feel the air ,setting self free
RSA23 thank you,that is beautiful
That's a very corageous act, thanks for sharing!