Brain Dump
I get lost in my words
They trap me in my head
It's a dark place
But there is a bright light up ahead
Should I go toward it
Or go another way
Oops I'm overthinking
Time to runaway.
Happy thoughts come back
Only to be shattered by your hammer
Go away
I don't need you
I just need some therapy
Who doesn't
End scene.
@WellsFiction hiii sweetie ❤❤ great poem, but kinda sad🙁 remember thinking is bad for your health😱 don't do it😁 sends you rainbows of only happy thoughts 🌈🌈 gives you a giant tiny hug ❤❤ I hope your health is ok at the moment, I love you ❤
@Tinywhisper11 Hey hey Tiny! Thanks buddy. Overall I'm doing well. I plan to post more poetry this year, so stay tuned. How was your Christmas? My brother came home for the holidays( he's in the navy. His base is in Nevada.) It was really nice ❤️💗💖💞
@WellsFiction oh wow! You must have been soooo happy to see your brother, that's such a great present ❤❤ guess what I got for xmas!?!? Good poisoning🙁😂😂 can't wait to hear more of your poems ❤❤ hugs you tightly ❤❤
@Tinywhisper11 Oh no! Yes, it was nice to see him. Thanks hon. I was on the phone a bunch yesterday, discussing medical issues. The lady I spoke to had no idea what I was telling her. But she did call me ma'am the entire time which was chef's kiss. Love you xo 🫶💛
@WellsFiction love you too ❤❤ prays you'll get better soon ❤
@WellsFiction
A very nice poem. I liked the idea of words themselves acting as both a place and a force. I think it highlights so well their power to move us, change us, or even enslave us. Whilst i agree with @Tinywhisper11 that it certainly has sad undertones, I think there is also a vein of determination and self empowerment running through it which elevates the mood of the whole piece. Good show ol' bean.
@BastionKnight good show ol' bean 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 haha! I see your also from the UK😂😂😂
@BastionKnight Thank you so much. It definitely has a sad, yet uplifting tone to it. I've been embracing my inner Billie Eilish. Sometimes we must wander through the dark to find our light. Appreciate your comment friend :)
