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A crystal clear evidence of my craze

bloom006 Wednesday

This is my first time posting here. Might not be very good. But here it goes-

Pull my heart out of its cage,

It'll unfold quite an enthralling stage

Of love, pain and rage.

But do not faze 

If you find my lies scattered within a perplexing maze;

A crystal clear evidence of  my craze.

I do hope it puts you in a daze,

As I slowly disappear into the haze.

Goodnight, people. Let me know what you think :)

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azurePond Thursday

@bloom006 Beautiful poem. I love the rhyme scheme and the gentle yet steady rhythm the poem follows. Looking forward to more poems from you. Also, welcome to the community! <3

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bloom006 OP Thursday

@azurePond nice to meet you & thanks a lot!

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