A crystal clear evidence of my craze
This is my first time posting here. Might not be very good. But here it goes-
Pull my heart out of its cage,
It'll unfold quite an enthralling stage
Of love, pain and rage.
But do not faze
If you find my lies scattered within a perplexing maze;
A crystal clear evidence of my craze.
I do hope it puts you in a daze,
As I slowly disappear into the haze.
Goodnight, people. Let me know what you think :)
@bloom006 Beautiful poem. I love the rhyme scheme and the gentle yet steady rhythm the poem follows. Looking forward to more poems from you. Also, welcome to the community! <3
@azurePond nice to meet you & thanks a lot!
@bloom006
Hi Bloom! I disappeared a while back and was unable to welcome you on time..*scratches head*..but still WELCOME!! And it was a wonderful poem..I loved your of simple words and a two piece rhyme scheme. Simple lines yet powerful message! Keep it up..^^