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A Place Within.(When you Make that change..)

insightfulTruth93 December 20th, 2015

So I'm standing at this overpass,I've been doing it a lot lately..It's like I come here everyday.So..Now you're standing here like me,and you see a man whiskey coming through his pores,a woman scratching at her arm at an itch that doesn't exist in your world,a child shivering,wishing upon stars for a home..A HUMAN..And don't mistake me,I'm not about to say that person's seemingly pitiful condition is a sign of warning for you so to speak,oh no love,you've been warned plenty,but in that instant a good choice is about to be made within you...
You sweat,you second guess,you fumble with your cigarette,but it is to no avail,you just got told my friend,it is as though for a split second the whole Universe narrows down to you and your immediate surrounding ,and then it goes back to expanding at it's natural pace,a tear rolls down your cheek not visible to anyone around you..
There's no helping it now..you've made the choice,it has been made with and without you and for some odd reason you find yourself saying "Thank you,Thank you...oh Thank you" into thin air.. :)

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HotFudge December 20th, 2015

@insightfulTruth93 that was pretty deep bro... i am trying to understand the meaning between these lines... will talk to you over the PM, about those hidden meanings

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insightfulTruth93 OP December 20th, 2015

@Param i would love that..thank you so much mate..i Appreciate...it...you think i should write more..this was my first here...your the best..*fist bumps*

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professionalPerspective60 December 20th, 2015

@insightfulTruth93

I had to read this twice, and in a weird kind of way I felt it soothing! I couldn't tell you why perhaps the charming way in which it was written! I agree with @param, very deep and meaningful 🙂

Good luck with further writings I'm intrigued to read more🙂

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insightfulTruth93 OP December 20th, 2015

@professionalPerspective60 you have no idea how much that means to me..thank you so much <3

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