I Wrote this Poem and I want the public's opinion
But Mine Has Blown Away
Emily Dickinson said "Hope is the thing with feathers"
well mine has blown away. It realized someone such as I can't be saved by little thing that floats and sways.
But why does it leave?
Where will it go? Feathers fly with the wind. so where did the wind blow? it has been battered, broken, trashed and tossed.
so am I considered hopeless?
Am I considered lost? Hope is the thing with feathers
but mine has blown away.
@BirdyGirly
Your poem touched my heart, it is very deep. I'm glad you joined our community and hope that you will find the support you're looking for here 💙
Hope gives us a reason to go on
It is like a flower which needs to be nurtured
We need to believe that life will get better
It will - even if it does not seem possible at some times
Such beautiful writing. Touched my soul ❤️
@BirdyGirly This is beautiful.
AMAZING! Tears in my eyes! SO deep! I don't usually like poetry.
I partly replied cos I'm looking for somewhere to share my compositions (not English literature, music).
I don't know if you call that a 'creative community'.
@BirdyGirly
Tears leapt into my eyes after reading this powerful piece :') Thank you for sharing this with us, friend 💜
