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jst a story that i might be writing

User Profile: Blue123456618
Blue123456618 April 7th, 2023

pls help me

I turned the piano on. look at that black and white keys. imagine yourself being so small that you could somehow manage to sit on a black key. now it's midnight. you ( small you) sitting there finally feel like you want to get up and play a song(why? cs that's ur soul's food), ... you want to stand up and walk on the white keys now. you want to make a sound... but it's midnight. in this house , there are creatures that will wake up (let's call them shadows). if they wake up, they will come and unplug the piano completely.
what would you do?



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User Profile: Mya000
Mya000 April 14th, 2023

@Blue123456618 It sounds like an interesting story idea! I'm happy to help. From what you've described, it seems like there's a sense of tension and urgency in the situation. If the main character wants to play the piano but there are “shadows” that could wake up and prevent them from doing so, it creates a sense of risk and danger.

One approach you could take is to explore the main character's motivations for wanting to play the piano at midnight. Is it something they've been longing to do for a long time, but have been unable to because of the shadows? Or is there a particular song or melody that's been stuck in their head and they feel compelled to play it?

You could also delve into the nature of the shadows and why they're so menacing. Are they actual creatures, or a metaphorical representation of something else? What happens if they do wake up and unplug the piano? Is there a consequence for the main character, or is it more symbolic?

Overall, it seems like you have a strong foundation for a story with a lot of potential for exploration and character development. Keep brainstorming and see where the story takes you!

User Profile: SammyLouise
SammyLouise April 14th, 2023

@Blue123456618

What an interesting concept! Great idea :) I would...

Play something so beautiful that even the shadows stop, listen and are held at bay :)



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