Poetry
bestTalker9406
August 3rd, 2024
I'm riding my cycle
Nature's pouring liquid from above
I can feel it in my mouth
But why do I taste two different ones,
One tasteless and one salty.
Izila
August 28th, 2024
@bestTalker9406
Beautiful poetry! Thanks for sharing!😊
vanshikap12
December 30th
@bestTalker9406
What a beautifully crafted poem! Your imagery of riding a cycle amidst nature’s elements is captivating. The way you explore the sensory experience of rain and the contrasting tastes adds depth and intrigue. It evokes a sense of reflection on our surroundings and the complexities of emotions we encounter. I love how you invite the reader to ponder the different flavors of experience—both the mundane and the profound. Thank you for sharing such a thoughtful piece! 🌧️🚴♂️💧✨
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Thank you so much ☺️
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