Trapped inside
How i wish to be free
From this cage that holds me
And my mind that controls me
And my thoughts that scold me
I’m overwhelmed
I’m trapped wanting to escape
But I’m blind looking for the way
There’s nothing left
Nothing left that I can see
It gets so hard to breathe
My mind and thoughts
They won’t let me be
I feel so hopeless
Like I’m trapped inside
Inside of my mind
Inside of my brain
I don’t know why I’m feeling this way
And there’s no escape
I feel so unsafe
I’m dying slowly and I’m trying to see
But I’m blind and my mind controls me
@Ana2024
Hi Ana! It is such a lyrical and moving piece! The struggle is so vivid and clear, almost like imagery. The feeling described through each line strike deep. The will to escape slowly fadind gives a sadeening and heart breaking touch. It is melancholic and transforming! <3
@Ana2024
Such a desperately sad and bleak poem. It made me very sad to read it. I hope that it's inspiration is pure creation, for I would hate for anyone to feel the sort of depths the poem describes.
@BastionKnight
you’d be surprised
@Ana2024
Then I hope that at least writing the poem brought catharsis. Thank you for sharing it with us. I look forward to reading more of your work.