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User Profile: BastionKnight
BastionKnight December 12th


Hush, hush sweet darkness, don't despair.

No sad sibilant sigh,

No rueful thoughts, no weighty care,

It is just you and I.

You are more than the fear filled warning.

More than the bridge from dusk till morning,

From which wild roiling shapes are forming

That freeze and horrify.


There, there soft darkness do not cry,

They mean you no ill will.

Enfolding silent lullaby,

Instinctive primal thrill.

Within you lights escape their mooring,

In velvet aether, dancing, soaring!

Enchantment kindled, rushing, pouring!

There's magic in you still.


When light departs, that void you fill,

Awaiting as a friend.

And by my side you stay until

The night reaches it's end.

Your formless cloak upon us sweeping,

Persuades the frenzied hearts to sleeping

And dreams relieve the souls still weeping.

Through lonely streets you wend.


Fret not, oh darkness I'll defend,

I shall not cede your hill.

Misunderstood, unfairly penned

By voices loud and shrill.

You're not the teeth, nor do the biting.

No, neither flesh or spirit smiting,

But their imagination fighting.

They tilt at their windmill.


Shush, shush kind darkness let's distil

That which engenders smiles.

Transforming dread, instead instil

With love, no more reviles.

No more should it be just you chasing.

Towards you arms outstretched are racing,

Those once who cringed, but we're replacing.

With ardent lygophiles.

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User Profile: wIthpeACE
wIthpeACE December 12th

@BastionKnight

With a vivid description of how we wronged darkness- telling about its brave tales and kindness, all the while soothing it- as if treating a fragile piece of glass. Truly Marvelous, Knight! In the depth of your I see a message- to not judge the dark by what you hear for it too heals. To not judge a person as well with tales brewed from other's ink! Because Light and dark are always entwining and never ending!!

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User Profile: BastionKnight
BastionKnight OP December 12th

@wIthpeACE

*Bows humbly* It is gratifying that it grabbed your attention so. Thank you for your kind and thoughtful comments.

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User Profile: azurePond
azurePond December 13th

@BastionKnight 

I truly admire how this poem reimagines darkness with such tenderness and understanding. With lines like "Hush, hush sweet darkness, don't despair" gently guiding us into a sense of calm. There’s something truly captivating about these lines—“Within you lights escape their mooring,.....There's magic in you still!” The imagery feels so alive, as if the darkness is not empty, but brimming with energy and magic - waiting to be discovered. I’m not sure if the poem speaks to the darkness within everyone, or if it’s inspired by the misunderstood darkness within the self—Knight and Night. Perhaps I’m reading too much into it.
Anyway, It’s a tender reminder to approach the unknown with acceptance, and even love. A genuinely humane and heartfelt piece, Knight! *bows in respect *


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User Profile: BastionKnight
BastionKnight OP December 13th

@azurePond

*Smiles* Your analysis is as always eagerly received, and I appreciate your generous praise. It is always so pleasing to hear what aspects call to others and what parts pick at the curiosity and imagination. It is encouraging and soothing, and so I thank you. *Bows*

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