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She's Fought...[a little trigger warning!]

User Profile: wIthpeACE
wIthpeACE October 27th

She has fought many battles,

With b.lood.y scenes you dare not see.

She walked many miles,

On the land where you'll not get to be.

She has cried many tears,

For the people you'll never know.

She has set sites on many places,

The ones where you'll never go.

She has laughed many laughs,

With strangers on the road.

She has known the emotions,

That those people carry with their load.

She has drank water,

From the corners of many streams.

And as many as the drops of water,

She learnt of many dreams.

She has bent but she did not break,

And she stayed ever true;

She fought just because,

Being a fighter was all she ever knew...

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User Profile: BastionKnight
BastionKnight October 28th

@wIthpeACE

Very nice. It comes across a lot like lyrics. It has a very different tempo to some of the other poems you have shared which makes me curious if this was an older poem you have revisited or trying a different style. Interested to see what may come next.

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User Profile: wIthpeACE
wIthpeACE OP October 28th

@BastionKnight

Thanks Knight! Yeah...I did write it to a piano beat! No it not an older poem but actually I wrote it at the moment I posted. I guess I was overwhelmed and this lead to it! :D

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User Profile: BastionKnight
BastionKnight October 28th

@wIthpeACE

Sorry to hear you were felling overwhelmed, but pleased to know you channelled your feelings into something creative that we could then appreciate. Hope you are feeling better.

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BastionKnight October 28th

@BastionKnight

(feeling, not felling....grr typos)

User Profile: wIthpeACE
wIthpeACE OP October 28th

@BastionKnight

Its ok. Yeah...Poetry and sketching is my my safe haven !! Thanks for the well wishes~

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User Profile: funnySpring9178
funnySpring9178 October 28th

@wIthpeACE  this is so beautiful, i rly loved what u wrote queen

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wIthpeACE OP October 28th

@funnySpring9178 Thank u !! Appreciate it!🥰

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Anycat October 28th

@wIthpeACE

Amazed xD

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wIthpeACE OP October 28th

@Anycat

Thank u anycat! Your feedback really helped! ;)

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User Profile: azurePond
azurePond October 28th

@wIthpeACE I love reading your poems—they all have this hope and strength about them. I think it mirrors you. Bent, but never break ...Another amazing work! Keep writing! 

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wIthpeACE OP October 28th

@azurePond

Thanks Azure! It means a lot!😁

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