Say your most heart touching poems here!💜 (can be created or can be of any author)
Hello there everyone!
I am creating this forum for some :
Poem lovers , Writing lovers and for everyone else !
We all have some poems which make a deep spaces in our heart and they remain in our heart for a long time
Here's mine ( what I have wrote )
Race of exam
Things are changing all day long
Days are passing non stop
Feels like everything passing so fast.....
And can't catch it all up
Feels like I am behind in the race
Feels like everyone pushes me back
But I am going on little slow but trying to catch all up.....
I try to catch them u they run again...
Maybe..my attempts aren't good
Maybe...this mind doesn't want that happen ,
I am agai n all behind...bit this time stressed
And getting slower again...
My Freinds will win this race,
What about me ? How will I face???
But all thinking of that my mind suddenly thought something..
Enough !We would compete !!
With full of motivation I came back to study..
Tried very hard ut again failed...
But this time... I didn't got slower
Instead I got bit faster than before
Cause this time ,
Thoughts were positive
wasn't letting me back like before ....
And soon one day will come ..
And everyone watch
How strongly I completed my Race of Exam.
Than u for reading .
@navyHouse3677
Thankyou for sharing heart touching poem.
@TheAlchemist1111
Your most welcome, I hope you share some poems too
@navyHouse3677
I am sharing few lines of song that I really love from Answer: Love Myself by BTS.
(Translated from Korean to English)
@navyHouse3677 uhh so I don't want to share any works that I might publish in the future here...but if you want to read it, go search "Poppies in bloom" on Tapas in the Novel section. You'll find a story by Raspberrin. That's me. And this is one story that I won't be traditionally publishing in the future.
I do write poems but occasionally, and I think my work is good but can't be compared to the likes of Robert Frost or Emily Dickinson. But I do believe that my longer pieces have more potential. Haha.
All the best to you if you plan on publishing stuff in the future!
@Roisin0
I will read for sure 💜💜 rosin
And it's alright I understand you don't want to share poems
But you have actually strong potential for future plans of writing any good novel yk 💜
This is so kind of you to say. I wish you success if you ever pursue a career/side-career in writing as well. ((:
@navyHouse3677
blackout poetry from a JFK speech :)
knowledge noted
in an hour of change
and ignorance,
the vast,
and the unanswered
the stars and
those who moved forward
rode the first waves
into
the planets beyond
I wrote this one when life was just to much. Luckily it does get better :)
Its so hard to be alive
When I feel so dead
I walk around saying
It's ok,
Life gets better.
Everyday
I pray
For my soul
To come alive
But the dead is
Slow to rise
So, so slow
Can I close my eyes for a minute
To feel what it's like
Or would I be judged
For selfishness like the others
And if I choose to stay awake
And my heart stays empty
Would you tell me to be thankful
When I'm unable to smile?
Or would you also pretend to care
And break down shouting:
"How could she do this
She knew she could talk to us"
It's OK
It doesn't matter
Acting is a skill
Go pursue it.
But
If you are that one who cares
It's written because it can't be said
It's all locked up
And the key got lost
I want to be alive
Not just breathing
Alive
But I feel numb
No, I won't do it
I'm to afraid
But it's always in my mind
Echoing
From age 6
And here I am still coping.
Just being Alive
Everything Rumi
