Say your most heart touching poems here!ЁЯТЬ (can be created or can be of any author)
Hello there everyone!
I am creating this forum for some :
Poem lovers , Writing lovers and for everyone else !
We all have some poems which make a deep spaces in our heart and they remain in our heart for a long time
Here's mine ( what I have wrote )
Race of exam
Things are changing all day long
Days are passing non stop
Feels like everything passing so fast.....
And can't catch it all up
Feels like I am behind in the race
Feels like everyone pushes me back
But I am going on little slow but trying to catch all up.....
I try to catch them u they run again...
Maybe..my attempts aren't good
Maybe...this mind doesn't want that happen ,
I am agai n all behind...bit this time stressed
And getting slower again...
My Freinds will win this race,
What about me ? How will I face???
But all thinking of that my mind suddenly thought something..
Enough !We would compete !!
With full of motivation I came back to study..
Tried very hard ut again failed...
But this time... I didn't got slower
Instead I got bit faster than before
Cause this time ,
Thoughts were positive
wasn't letting me back like before ....
And soon one day will come ..
And everyone watch
How strongly I completed my Race of Exam.
Than u for reading .
@navyHouse3677
Navyyy, long time, how have you been? ЁЯТЬ *shares cookies*
You are such a creative person, I feel the emotions you tried expressing/ conveying through the poem. Fear of lagging and being behind in the race is so valid, something more or less everyone experiences, I wish it wasn't a race to compete against others :/ that surely adds unnecessary stress. I believe in you, you amazing human, you try hard and it does matter. ЁЯТЬ Thankyou for sharing your poem and making this space for everyone else to share also.
@Sunisshiningandsoareyou
Thank you so muucchh for reading my poem (I'm glad atleast someone thought to see it)
And yeah haven't been online lately so yeah days were quite upsetting but now everything is fine have came back
Glad to be back tho
*huugggs and offer cookies*
@navyHouse3677
Aw ofcourse I did, it is so well written, I'm sure others saw it too and many more will see it also in the upcoming days hopefully. <3
I'm glad so glad things are better for you at this time, and yay so good to see you back. *hugs back*
*noms and shares cookies*
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Poem by Ashutosh Rana
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Hello everyone ЁЯТЬ
This is navy
Today I have a poem in Hindi. I know many of people won't be able to understand the poem
But I'll bring English version of it soon ЁЯТЬЁЯТЬ
Tagging a few people I know they may understand this poem
@elwinthisside124
@kindHuman1425
@softSummer2005
@theriverissinging
@Izzzzzzyyyyyy
@Starlasky (ik you're on break but still if you find it out after your break:') )
@Victor04 ( I miss you a lot)
@navyHouse3677
Also tagging afew People more
@yourbuddy30
@ferventflame
@tidyHickory3283
@navyHouse3677 I totally agree with your poem. Every minute of our life we do think about our childhood and it is one of the best phases of life
@navyHouse3677 thank you for sharing, navy тЭдя╕П a lot of us do feel what the poem tends to convey!
@navyHouse3677 This...is amazing. I think the youth of today would certainly relate to this piece, for every word carries meaning in a way that not only conveys what it seeks to express but in sooth manages to touch one's heart. Thank you for delighting me with this! I usually don't check my notifications, but I'm glad I did today!
@navyHouse3677
Here is a poem I wrote about my mental health :-)
Blessings, Day
PERCEIVING
Perceiving what we believe in
is deceiving and has no meaning
as life's mistreating
dishes out this beating
........Leaving us bleeding
But we cant see it if we close our minds
....and we cant think about this when we're blind
so walk away and you will find,
a friend here waiting for a sign!
So take your time
.....and organize
whats on your mind
and you'll wisely find
you're not really behind
so relax your eyes and you'll realize
you're fine just the way you are!
And you can reach for the stars
put cream on the scars
and then healing transpires
The delusional parts only confuse our goals
...and they corrupt our souls
Leaving us with a heart full of holes.
Set goals now and your mind will see
what closed eyes have failed to believe
Don't let sight deceive & keep us on our knees
....throwing logic into the breeze.
Winds at your back excited
Winds of hope reignited me.
Step by step confide
so we can share secrets of life
........Thinking
"what could be?"
.......But only if we let it,
if you hold back you'll regret it!
"There, Now I've gone and said it!"
We hold ourselves down......
Dirty on the ground.....
I've found myself tormented and bound
by invisibility. ......
I've ignored all possibility.....
so I must set myself free
of a self-inflicted confined mystery
....That causes so much mind-bending misery
@juliak1968
Wooow it actually touched me so badly that i feel crying now ЁЯШн
You are so talented thanks you for sharing it on my forum, I really appreciate it ЁЯТЬЁЯТЬЁЯТЬ
@navyHouse3677
Hi,
Thank you for the nice compliment!~
This is a poem I wrote 2 years ago:
You feel that burn
coming out of your throat
when tears ooze out from your eyes
for the swords getting out from their mouths
Pain hurts
It sucks
Mocks are rocks
for a broken glass
Yet remember that moment
you feared the grave
it was black, blank
with ones you loved for a day
They cuddled my soul
with warm hands
around my hopeless hopes
for their love is a dorm
that never had a space for my folks
In here they refers to my family.
The moment I feared grave refers to an incident where it was said that the builidng I was in was having a time bomb, well luckily there wasn't.
Immortality by Clare Harner, 1934
Do not stand
By my grave, and weep
I am not there,
I do not sleepтАФ
I am the thousand winds that blow
I am the diamond glints in snow
I am the sunlight on ripened grain,
I am the gentle, autumn rain.
As you awake with morningтАЩs hush,
I am the swift, up-flinging rush
Of quiet birds in circling flight,
I am the day transcending night.
Do not stand
By my grave, and cryтАФ
I am not there,
I did not die.
This poem was written shortly after the sudden death of HarnerтАЩs brother. Using art to process grief is so beautiful to me. When IтАЩm having a hard time with someoneтАЩs passing, I always turn to this poem for some comfort.
@littleMoon1313
Very nice poem!!!~
@littleMoon1313
hey, this peom is really amazingЁЯТЫЁЯТЫЁЯТЫ
Middlemist camellia
When all is lost
When my tears flow down my face
When I begin to hurt myself
When I begin to starve
When I canтАЩt take much more.
I think of her
The Middlemist camellia
I smell her beautiful scent
Imagine her beautiful smile
I put the sharp edge down
Wipe my face of tears
Smile at my reflection
When all is lost
I think of her
The Middlemist camellia flower
The only one in the world
@navyHouse3677
Hi navy . Loved your poem. I also have a knack for writing poems . May I share the link to my poem ? .
Regards,
Meet.
@calmsoulmeet
Sureee you're free to share your poems links as well ЁЯЩВ
Ahh it's been soo long since we last talked!!
How are you doing?
It's an amazing poem navy and I hope those positive thoughts don't leave your side.
Good luck @navyhouse3677
A couple of poems I wrote for my wife a few years ago and posted to a FB group called "14 Words For Love".
The beauty of your heart, so fine
it softens the hardened corners of mine