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Another dead-end

User Profile: Ana2024
Ana2024 Tuesday

A million thoughts in my head

A thousand wounds I’ll never forget

A life that’s bound to end

Yet suffering has reached its last breath

I need to be strong 

I must go forth

Yet I’m pulled back

By a weight I can’t see

It’s right behind me

I’m running and running

But can’t seem to get away

The darkness is surrounding me

And I can’t find my way

The walls are closing in

And it’s getting hard to breathe

I’m getting away

But it keeps following me

Is this all in my head?

A cycle that’s bound to end

I’m running as fast as I can 

Hopefully this isn’t a dead- end 

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User Profile: azurePond
azurePond Wednesday

@Ana2024 This poem really draws you in with its sense of relentless motion, like you're running but constantly held back. The question "Is this all in my head?" makes you wonder whether it’s all just a fight within– almost like a question Sylvia Plath might pose in her own work. And the ending - "Hopefully this isn’t a dead-end" offers a flicker of hope amidst the darkness. It’s like a quiet act of defiance, holding onto the possibility of escape even when everything feels trapped.