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My English/Language Arts "Essay"

AnnieChae April 9th, 2023

My English teacher gave my class an argumentative essay about why or why not astronauts should go to space, and I'm kind of lazy and stupid so I wrote a poem about it because I didn't have enough time to write an actual essay because of stuff I've been dealing with, and also I like poetry better. My teacher gave me a 0, but I want to know what someone else thinks of it so I'm posting it here.

When astronauts first went out to space

It was because of race against race

Humans want to know more than they can

In just 80 years of their life, while the Earth has been polluted and ran

And people are getting bored of our home

They want to find somewhere else to roam

And know how the universe works

But others are last, you are first

Earth is the only place we can be

And survive where there is other life that we can see

So we leave it all to AI's

Which were made because in our lives

We're not smart enough to know what's inside

This small planet alone

We can't find another home

So we shouldn't send astronauts out to space

Because we need to see the Earth's face



Please tell me what you think!!! 🖤

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innateJoy9602 April 9th, 2023

@AnnieChae

I’m a big fan of space. But I do see how we can sometimes neglect our own planet. While there is so much to explore ‘out there,’ there is also a lot to explore and take care of here. Lovely poem!💜

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chocobratz888 April 9th, 2023

@innateJoy9602 I think we neglect our planet a lot. Not just in terms of research but in terms of care in general too. Like so much money going to Mars and stuff when ppl be dying from diseases or dealing with poverty

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YourCaringConfidant July 26th, 2023

@AnnieChae Bravo! I think the reader can clearly understand your argument. It's unfortunate that your teacher gave you a 0 for the assignment. I, personally, think you wrote an amazing poem and would have given you an A. Do me a favor though, please... and don't refer to yourself as stupid. You are so far from that! And from reading your poem, I can tell you have great potential. I wish you all the best in your studies moving forward. ♡

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