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Just One More Day

User Profile: Sweetgirl07
Sweetgirl07 February 5th

Lost to sea, drifting away

Make it through, just one more day

Have to keep my head above the water

Oh say it isn't so, I truly am my mother's daughter

Reaching out, throw a lifeline

All this pain, wish it weren't mine

Holding on, strong and true

For my sisters I'll make it through

Back under the water I go

Oh my darling, I love you so

I hate the tears in your eyes

So for you, for them, I claw my way back to the sky

Even when I can't stand this pain

I force myself to stay

Lost to sea, drifting away

I'll make it through, just one more day

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User Profile: Heather225
Heather225 February 5th

@Sweetgirl07

beautifully written piece

User Profile: azurePond
azurePond February 6th

@Sweetgirl07 This poem is deeply moving and beautifully written. The line "Lost to sea, drifting away" perfectly captures the feeling of being overwhelmed, yet there's such strength in the repeated hope to "make it through, just one more day." The line "for my sisters I'll make it through" — is such a powerful testament to resilience and love. And the line "I truly am my mother's daughter" feels so loaded with meaning, carrying a heavy significance that resonates not just with the author, but with millions of women across the world. It speaks to that defining relationship, for better or for worse, that shapes us all in unique ways. Truly a heartfelt piece.