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User Profile: Lexiii99
Lexiii99 September 10th, 2024

Hey, I dont post on here often but I wanted to share a couple things I wrote: 

Tw...Suicide mentioned 

The girl who flew 

  1. I walked down the long street   

  2. Listening for the sound of sirens 

  3. Wishing and hoping my family will be okay 

  4. As I made my way to the house I felt a warm breeze on my face. 

  5. I decided to turn around it's not like I’m needed there any way 

  6. They were all smiling and hugging they looked like a normal family 

  7. I didnt wanna mess that up for them and enter their lives again 

  8. I fly away in the wind wishing I could go back. 

  9. I fly away wondering if I am missed 

  10. I fly away wishing I could hug my sister again 

  11. I fly away wishing I was wanted by my family 

  12. I fly away wishing I could fly away forever 

  13. I fly away just as bad as I was before I decided to fly 

  14. I fly away wondering if it was worth flying 

  15. I fly away hoping that my family will be okay. 

  16. I walk down the street 

  17. I walk past the street I flew at. 

  18. I walked past the light post I got jumped at. 

  19. I walked all the way till I was there. 

  20. I was at my grave where I became one with my body. 


Normal : 

  1. Normal one word I never understood 

  2. Normal the one-phrase that was not true 

  3. Normal is it possible that normal is a  thing

  4. Normal is different from my view of the world 

  5. Normal is a word that will make everyone question life

  6. Normal job 

  7. Normal nose 

  8. Normal face

  9. Normal eyes 

  10. Nobody has normal 

  11. Normal is a word we made up to make everyone work towards it. 

  12. Normal is you 

  13. Normal is your nose 

  14. Normal is your body 

  15. Normal is your personality 

  16. Normal is your eyes 

  17. Normal is the way you act 

  18. Normal is the way you walk 

  19. Normal is the way you talk 

  20. Normal is the way you live your life 

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User Profile: Mel
Mel September 22nd, 2024

@Selfloveisimportant

Thank you so much for sharing these deeply personal writings with us. The emotions in both pieces are so raw and profound, and it’s clear that you’ve been holding onto a lot of heavy feelings. In "The Girl Who Flew," there’s such a deep sense of isolation and longing for connection, while also expressing a painful desire to disappear. It feels like you're grappling with wanting to be seen, to be loved, and yet feeling like you're somehow separate from the world around you. The imagery of flying away is so powerful—it really captures the feeling of drifting between being present and wanting to escape.

In "Normal," the way you reflect on what the word means really strikes a chord. It speaks to the pressures so many of us feel about fitting into society’s expectations, and how elusive the idea of "normal" can be. It’s such a relatable exploration of how we compare ourselves to an ideal that might not even exist.

Your voice is strong! Thank you again for sharing this with us—it takes a lot of courage to put these emotions into words!

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