ray of hope
trigger warning this as has spiritual things in it hope ok to post this.
ray of hope
feeling sunshine coming in
like a ray of
hope after years of darkness
the clouds lift like fog off a lake
in early morning
first sign of rays of hope like rays if light
then more and more warm rays of hope like sunshine
this is
the beginning of better cays to come
as the Hope id only found
in Christ
by stormie
@stormieandpaws
Your use of natural imagery and sunlight to evoke a sense of possibility and spirituality creates a bright image. The duality of the material and the ephemeral, and the transitional states of weather phenomenon and light gives the impression of emotional movement and momentum.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
@BastionKnight
thank you for the feed back for this poem we have many of them but all have a spiritual part to them too. this is part of the healing work we been doing for some time. we might share others too. but was not sure if spiritual ones was allowed in this sub community.
@stormieandpaws
Oh Stormie, I feel for this poem deeply: a lot of feelings there; a mixture of melancholy and hope. Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing this with us. 💜💙
@ZenArashi
your very welcome thanks for the feedback too