A poem I've been working on...
Hey guys! I've been working on this poem, and I just wanted to share it and hope it speaks to some of you. I've never been much of a writer, but the idea for this just wouldn't seem to leave me. I hope you all enjoy! <3
That part of me that screams from within,
Who is caged but seeks freedom.
Lies impatiently therein,
For that day to come
When I, one shall be
With the imprisoned
And the free.
A creation of pride
Who doth cry out with joy.
Finally, in touch with the inside
No more reason to be coy.
When let go of every inhibition,
Then my essence will shout.
But, for now, silence poisons the soul,
Corrupting it from the inside out.
Holding you captive till life turns cold.
@ColbyJack3121
I wanted to reach out to you and express my admiration for the beautiful poem you have written. I can sense the depth of emotion and thought that has gone into each line, and it is truly inspiring.
It takes a lot of courage to delve deep within oneself and to confront the parts that are caged but seek freedom. Your poem is a testament to your willingness to explore your innermost thoughts and emotions.
I love the way you have used words to express your desire for freedom and your hope for that day when you will be able to break free from the chains that bind you. It's clear that you have given much thought to what is important in life and what it means to be truly free.
I want to encourage you to keep writing and to keep exploring your inner world. Your words have the power to inspire others and to create positive change in the world. Don't ever doubt the value of your voice and your perspective.
Remember that your journey towards freedom is a process, and it takes time and patience. Don't be too hard on yourself, and don't give up hope. Keep moving forward, and one day, you will break free from those inhibitions that hold you captive.
Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with us. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.
JustMeForYou
