Alone Together
Alone Together Laying in the darkness stillness all around Loneliness and rejection abound Listening to her breath deep in slumber A longing to reach out and touch her Knowing that my touch stirs nothing deep inside As tears fill my eyes my mind on another depressive ride To her love I am but a slave A look of passion just a spark is what I crave But alas another night goes by Inches from my love I lay defeated and cry It may not be very good but it's real and how I feel
@defeated1, wow, that's a beautiful description of longing - very poetic and honest. I know that these feelings may be unsettling for you, but I'm proud of you how you captured them in words and shared with us. It may seems like a insignificant fact, but it's sometimes enough to gain peace. Well done.
Thank you, @defeated1 and best wishes!
