my poetry!

pw123
January 19th, 2023
hi! i've never shared a whole poem so this is kinda terrifying. might start sharing them regularly, we'll see. i've been writing poetry for a couple months now and i just recently wrote this one:
that time when you laughed at me - while my blood pooled on the bathroom floor;
did you mean it?
that time when you sold my secret to them all - even the man with the bat in his hand;
was it worth it?
that time when you whispered in the kitchen - and we all heard you, tearing me down;
do you miss it?
that time when you smashed my things;
did you hear it?
the sound of my trust shattering with it?

ayeyaeyaaaaaaaa
January 19th, 2023
@pw123πππ

MrLikan153
January 19th, 2023
It is a good poetry

vanshikap12
December 30th, 2024
@pw123
Thank you for sharing!!