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I made a poem about how I feel. What

RosettaBlack7125 May 4th, 2020

I gave an inch they took a mile,

They kicked me down I just smiled.

They beat me down onto the ground,

This new place is comforting I found.

after some point I began to realize,

This isnt real its all inside.

Ive made this up out of sticks and rocks ,

All my pleasures and my deepest thoughts.

I hate to wonder what will happen,

If I decide to stay trapped in.

Others wont know if Im hurting it seems,

They all ways think Im only beems.

All they see is nothing sad,

Just a smiling face that always seems glad.

The happiest smile may show the brightest of eyes,

But then you dont realize the torcher they face inside there minds.

Whatever happens when the storm is no longer slower?

I would say in my experience that we feel like we want this life to be over.

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Jem7Cups May 7th, 2020

@RosettaBlack7125

What a beautifully raw and candid poem. You're so brave for posting this heart Do you write often? I'd love to hear more of your work!

Jem 🌼 (Anxiety & Depression forum supporter)

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RosettaBlack7125 OP May 8th, 2020

@Jem7Cups

Thank you. I just write what I feel, so yeah I write quite a lot. Though it's mostly sad stuff.... it's really not that good though. I just wanted to know if others felt this way....

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