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The Son of Life and Death

azurePond November 11th

He is the son of Life and Death—
His mother, with her sunlit breath,
Whispers, "Heal, bring warmth to the lost."
His father says, voice deep as the night,
"Stand firm and fight, no matter the cost."
Life moulds him with gentle hands,
Spinning art and joy from grace.
Death shapes him through sacrifice,
A worthy heir to a noble line,
Together, they forge him,
A heart bearing the weight of his parentage.

Among the humans, he walks—
A rain to sprout seedlings green,
In fields sown with dreams, unseen.
While his comrades keep him company
With talks about their ambitions and beliefs.
One dreamed of baking bread by the shore,
The scent of flour and salt rising with the tide.
Another longed to run through green fields,
Feet light as a river’s song.
The girl beside him, always gazing upwards,
Swore to climb the tallest mountain
Just to feel the sky in her bones.

Then the monsters came,
Tearing through their hopes,
Poisoning dreams with fear and dread.
The comrades fought, side by side,
But one by one, they fell dead.

He fought on, bruised and broken,
Until the last monster was slain.
He stood alone, purpose hollow,
His actions seemed meaningless
Like drawing lines in an endless tide,
He thought of letting go...

His eyes close, as though to fade away,
But then Death’s voice came, cold as iron:
"Fight on, though nothing remains."
Life’s whisper, soft as dawn:
"Remember them. Carry their spirit."
And so, with every beat, he begins.

At dawn, he runs through fields,
Each stride a promise.
In a quiet kitchen, he bakes—
Hands dusted with flour,
Each loaf a small revival.
He climbs hills in her honour,
Though the wind strikes
Sharp as a knife.
In the town, he leaves simple acts of kindness—
A loaf of bread by a stranger’s door,
A warm coat where frost bites.

For he is Hope,
The son of Life and Death,
A flame that reshapes
The world fractured by his parents.
In his steps, in his hands,
The fallen live on—
In each loaf, in each breath,
A dream rekindled, a future reborn.

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Tinywhisper11 November 11th

@azurePond that was amazing a very powerful poem ❤your way with words, and the message behind them is something quite special ❤❤

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azurePond OP November 12th

@Tinywhisper11 Thank you so much!

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BlueDarkAurora November 11th

@azurePond People have a love hate relation with hope but without it I don't think there would be any light<3 Beautiful poem :)

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azurePond OP November 12th

@BlueDarkAurora Thank you. I’m also one of those people who has a love-hate relationship with hope. But what you said is true—without hope, there’d be nothing.

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BlueDarkAurora November 12th

@azurePond Me too ^^' Hope has pushed me from some very tall mountains but it has also been a safety rope. 

I like the note you shared below about the poem<3 Hope he always finds peace and love.

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azurePond OP 14 hours ago

@BlueDarkAurora 

That’s such a lovely thought, thank you! Hope really does have a way of lifting us up when we least expect it, doesn’t it? And yeah - Peace, love and hope make life. Hope you find exactly that too. <3


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BlueDarkAurora 7 hours ago

@azurePond aw thank you <3 Hope we all do :)

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BastionKnight November 12th

@azurePond

Such wonderous stories you craft! I was utterly transported and enraptured. That is an amazing homage to Hope, and is filled with pathos and yet ends so uplifting. Another tour de force from the pen of azurePond. 

I am curious what was the inspiration behind this piece. Whilst I understand that most poems are very personal by nature, this one felt especially intimate. If this was just creative whimsy, then kudos.

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azurePond OP November 12th

@BastionKnight  Thank you. Glad it hit the mark—"tour de force," eh? That means a lot- like Damnn!

Well… I guess I can’t deny it’s personal anymore, and it wouldn’t be fair to the story either. Anyway, let’s just say I’ve met a lot of people—people with a wealth of experience. This story is about one of those people, but it’s not really mine to tell. I’ll give you a few details, though.

The poem’s about someone truly brave—a journalist, you know, one of those who go into war zones and authoritarian regimes. Long story short, he was the only one to survive a long ordeal of torture. When he got back, he wasn’t the same, but his friends left him with little tasks, almost like final wishes: eat three meals a day, run daily, only sleep on bed, learn a musical instrument … they desperately wanted him to live. 

I know I should’ve added some kind of note, but he hates any homages, publicity, or stuff like that.

Anyway, Thanks again!

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BastionKnight November 12th

@azurePond

Thank you for letting us know. That makes your piece all the more poignant, and I would like to think that if you have shown/will show this to that person, it pleases them. I believe it shows that inspiration breeds inspiration.

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azurePond OP 14 hours ago

@BastionKnight 

 Thank for your kind words! I’ve actually shown it to him after your comment, and we had a chat. It was exactly the push we both needed. Thanks so much for that. I’m a bit amazed—and honestly a bit ashamed—that it took us this long, but hey, better late than never!


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aisha5464 November 12th

@azurePond

Beautiful

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azurePond OP November 12th

@aisha5464 Thank you!

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