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User Profile: BastionKnight
BastionKnight November 25th, 2024


A quadrillion stars, (they estimate), comprise the endless night.

Yet they're outnumbered ten to one by all the dreams we set to flight. 

The trillions of the human cells, we count at thirty seven.

But days till Christmas seemed much larger when we were still eleven.

Eight billion people share this world, with more arriving daily.

Small sum compared to all the rest that's shelled, feathered, furred or scaly.

A year it takes for the heart to beat thirty five million times!

Still from love it cannot break, a prison that frees as it confines.

Over seven thousand languages are spoken now. Wow! Who Knew?

Which means there must be much more ways to say a simple "I love you".

One hundred percent / The whole of it / Entirety of the cake.

Strange then to say "Give 110!". More than there is to take!?

10 years a decade identified by its art, music, and clothes,

Nostalgically parcelled in neat little slots, trends fleetingly flows.

And now we reach units, nine down to one, looking ever so small.

Yet One is YOU, unique in existence. Thus, most precious of all.

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User Profile: SolitaryBird
SolitaryBird November 25th, 2024

@BastionKnight

Really beautiful! You write with such elegance.

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BastionKnight OP November 25th, 2024

@SolitaryBird

Thank you for your very kind words, it is really very much appreciated and means so much coming from someone who's opinion I greatly respect.

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User Profile: Tinywhisper11
Tinywhisper11 November 25th, 2024

@BastionKnight that was very cleverly written ❤ your very good with words ❤❤

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BastionKnight OP November 25th, 2024

@Tinywhisper11

Your words made me smile and set my day off on a good note, so thank you. I hope you enjoyed the poem and very much appreciate you taking the time to leave a comment.

*Bows humbly*

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Tinywhisper11 November 25th, 2024

@BastionKnight ❤❤❤

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User Profile: azurePond
azurePond November 25th, 2024

@BastionKnight 

Your skillful use of numbers and imagery to reflect on the vastness of the world, while also celebrating the uniqueness of each person, is brilliant. It’s a beautiful reminder of both the enormity and the preciousness of every life. Each line offers a fresh perspective, prompting us to reflect on the beauty and wonder of existence. Truly, BastionKnight, you wield your pen like a sword, commanding the power of words to illuminate life’s beauty. Thank you for sharing!


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BastionKnight OP November 25th, 2024

@azurePond

You always provide such beautiful insights azurePond, and it is a delight reading your analysis. I definitely do not deserve the praise you bestow, but it makes me very happy that you say such things. If you and others enjoy what I scribble, then I am pleased beyond measure.

*Smiles*

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User Profile: wIthpeACE
wIthpeACE December 8th, 2024

@BastionKnight

Amazing, Knight! *claps* A perfect symphony of words..and such depth in the thought you put here. Keep it up!

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BastionKnight OP December 9th, 2024

@wIthpeACE

*Bows* Thank you so much for your generous praise, it is very much appreciated.

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