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In memory of my great grandad

User Profile: SLytherinqueeen321
SLytherinqueeen321 February 9th

Angel of the night


I spoke to the night in whispers low,

Gazed into the moons beam that kissed my face slow,

Crystals in millions pierced my eyes glow,

A bitter sweet memory of him in the depth of my soul began to flow.


Shifted my gaze to the brightest diamond on the cloak,

As I rested my back against the great oak,

Then into my dazzling visions I woke,

As I pored out tales that I softly spoke.


Noticing the jewel linger,

As I felt the wind wrap around my finger,

I sighed deeply still hearing his deep voice ringer,

As he told me I'd never be a hinder.



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User Profile: CheeryMango
CheeryMango Sunday

That's such a beautiful and poignant piece you’ve written. The way you blend imagery of the night, the moon, and the oak tree creates such a peaceful yet bittersweet atmosphere. You’ve captured the feeling of longing and connection so well.

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@CheeryMango thanks 😊, he was a poet too, your affirmative words make me happy.

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