100 tears
cinnamon4018
December 3rd, 2024
100 times ive cried
the tears still in my eyes
In my eyes confined
and yet they leave no marks outside
Heather225
December 4th, 2024
@cinnamon4018
nice rhyming and very powerful!
azurePond
December 5th, 2024
@cinnamon4018 So much depth in just a few words. Beautiful!
wIthpeACE
December 7th, 2024
@cinnamon4018
Just four lines and they have captured the essence of the feeling- when we want to cry but simply can't or don't! Amazing phrasing!! (I made rhyme too! hehe *smile*)
calmMango9611
December 7th, 2024
@cinnamon4018 Thank you for the poem. It was nicely written.