100 tears
cinnamon4018
December 3rd
100 times ive cried
the tears still in my eyes
In my eyes confined
and yet they leave no marks outside
Heather225
December 4th
@cinnamon4018
nice rhyming and very powerful!
azurePond
December 5th
@cinnamon4018 So much depth in just a few words. Beautiful!
wIthpeACE
December 7th
@cinnamon4018
Just four lines and they have captured the essence of the feeling- when we want to cry but simply can't or don't! Amazing phrasing!! (I made rhyme too! hehe *smile*)
calmMango9611
December 7th
@cinnamon4018 Thank you for the poem. It was nicely written.