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Bluered200 April 17th

___♡Something♡____

I was on the path, moving towards accomplishment, 

I was fighting and winning the battles,

I felt good, seeing people praised

But was the road clear without and troubles?

I was feeling down and depressed, 

Things are not easy as it seems

Clouds of anxiety and self doubt raised,

Each step was harder, as I was near to my dreams,

But I was happy that I was not alone,

There was something that stood with me

The warmth I felt was something known,

I am still searching, what it could be?

And I am sure, it would live forever with me...



Wrote be me.. haha.. it's not like something sophisticated poems.. but this was my way of venting out today!! 

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helpfulSoul64 April 17th

It's a good one. Poems doesn't always have to be sophisticated and all, there's elegance in simplicity.

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Bluered200 OP April 17th

@helpfulSoul64 

👀thanks

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Bluered200 OP April 17th

@Bluered200 

The backstory....

I have important exam in somedays.. I am alone here.. one friendship broke recently... I literally broke out.. I was missing my parents to cheer me up.... then felt god was sitting beside me when I was crying.. 
delicateMonkey April 18th

@Bluered200

There is no wrong way to vent <3 Thank you for sharing your art with us!
cristlecares April 18th

@Bluered200

Awww that's a very cute poem💙 I'm sure you've tried hard to vent your feelings in this poem and be hopeful for good things....

What matters is, you writing out your feelings as it is rather making a poem which is called sophisticated😇

I wish you best of luck for your exam and I know you'll rockkkk🤩🤩

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Bluered200 OP April 18th

@cristlecares 

Thank you dear.. but I haven't cope up from those bad feelings still... lets see what happens! Trying little little everyday

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